Little Poems
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Comment from Liberty Justice
Lively personification as dragon defends his gold with his loot. Wondrous alliterations abound creating dancing rhythm for the vicious dragon breath. liberty justice
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Lively personification as dragon defends his gold with his loot. Wondrous alliterations abound creating dancing rhythm for the vicious dragon breath. liberty justice
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Thank you Liberty for a delightful review.
Comment from MacMhuirich
Wow, this is brilliant, in content and form. I've never seen this form before but it looks rather intriguing. The well crafted wording hold a good warning to heed, though I'm not sure we've got many Dragons around our area. This was a superb read and thank you for highlighting this form.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Wow, this is brilliant, in content and form. I've never seen this form before but it looks rather intriguing. The well crafted wording hold a good warning to heed, though I'm not sure we've got many Dragons around our area. This was a superb read and thank you for highlighting this form.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Thank you John. I really appreciate your enthusiasm and the stars. Have a Holy and blessed holiday season.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A formidable image and fine accomplishment of this form.
Sometimes merely to rhyme is difficult so to master this challenging form is a feat indeed.
I appreciate the description of the intricacies of this form.
Sorry! No sixes ******
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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A formidable image and fine accomplishment of this form.
Sometimes merely to rhyme is difficult so to master this challenging form is a feat indeed.
I appreciate the description of the intricacies of this form.
Sorry! No sixes ******
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Thank you Shirley. I appreciate it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
An interesting poem form and I formative about the dragon and his protecting nature of his gold. Never try to take its possessions you may get burned.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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An interesting poem form and I formative about the dragon and his protecting nature of his gold. Never try to take its possessions you may get burned.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Thank you. Yes Sandra. You got it!
Comment from Joan E.
I always watch my step around dragons, but I had forgotten about Curt Mongold's Vers Beaucoup! I enjoyed your internal rhymes and the clever tale plus illustration. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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I always watch my step around dragons, but I had forgotten about Curt Mongold's Vers Beaucoup! I enjoyed your internal rhymes and the clever tale plus illustration. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
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Thank you Joan.
Comment from robyn corum
Ummmmm...
No thank you.
First of all -- to the dragon and his breath.
Second of all -- to attempting this type of 'many rhymes' poetry.
NO THANK YOU!! -- but you just go right ahead.
GREAT JOB!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Ummmmm...
No thank you.
First of all -- to the dragon and his breath.
Second of all -- to attempting this type of 'many rhymes' poetry.
NO THANK YOU!! -- but you just go right ahead.
GREAT JOB!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thank you Robyn. Your welcome. I'll try.
Comment from Pantygynt
I do love these wordplay things. I love the way they progress and three is just too much so we are ready for the change and it can be from masculine to femininity. And then, to end, the masculine again. The post prandial wine it is that line by line I would review and say to you " Goodnight, another job done well, thanks to your muse's spell.
Well, Tom, it's the end of the week so why not!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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I do love these wordplay things. I love the way they progress and three is just too much so we are ready for the change and it can be from masculine to femininity. And then, to end, the masculine again. The post prandial wine it is that line by line I would review and say to you " Goodnight, another job done well, thanks to your muse's spell.
Well, Tom, it's the end of the week so why not!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Ok, two is good too.
