Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "The Other Man"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
27 total reviews
Comment from Muffins
The free verse style is loaded with raw emotions, righteous and conviction from a point of view rarely written from. This is a classic country song that claws its way to the core of the mess love can be.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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The free verse style is loaded with raw emotions, righteous and conviction from a point of view rarely written from. This is a classic country song that claws its way to the core of the mess love can be.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
This is a very well written poem of a real situation for many of us. I am like you, I prefer free verse. I don't like constricting rules of rhyme.
gypsy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Hello :)
This is a very well written poem of a real situation for many of us. I am like you, I prefer free verse. I don't like constricting rules of rhyme.
gypsy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this.
Comment from Judvan2
I Love free style and I love this poem. I also write allot in this style. The story is great and all the words fit to tell it. Written from a different point of view. Thank you for sharing,
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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I Love free style and I love this poem. I also write allot in this style. The story is great and all the words fit to tell it. Written from a different point of view. Thank you for sharing,
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated, as are the 6 Stars.
Comment from mvbrooks
This reads like a country song with it's ability to strip emotions down to their core with phrases like "So, I stood back and let her walk away
Cause I knew she'd be back in just another day"
It's very honest in its description of the relationship between the narrator/other man and the woman. The story line and emotions expressed seem realistic and relate-able.
The notes about the rhyme scheme make sense--there's enough of a rhyme to make the "story" memorable--but the story is not "forced" to fit a rhyme in.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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This reads like a country song with it's ability to strip emotions down to their core with phrases like "So, I stood back and let her walk away
Cause I knew she'd be back in just another day"
It's very honest in its description of the relationship between the narrator/other man and the woman. The story line and emotions expressed seem realistic and relate-able.
The notes about the rhyme scheme make sense--there's enough of a rhyme to make the "story" memorable--but the story is not "forced" to fit a rhyme in.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these Country lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from ciliverde
I'm trying to figure out why you have a picture of this nice looking horse with your poem. It is a handsome animal though.
It is interesting to "feel" things from the viewpoint of the other man. My husband's first wife left him for the other man. So, while that guy seems like a jerk from an exterior view, there's always more to the story.
I agree that at times you do have to step up to the plate. Many of us have been down there on the floor, feeling that pain, and maybe that's what gets us up to the plate. Well done.
Carol
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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I'm trying to figure out why you have a picture of this nice looking horse with your poem. It is a handsome animal though.
It is interesting to "feel" things from the viewpoint of the other man. My husband's first wife left him for the other man. So, while that guy seems like a jerk from an exterior view, there's always more to the story.
I agree that at times you do have to step up to the plate. Many of us have been down there on the floor, feeling that pain, and maybe that's what gets us up to the plate. Well done.
Carol
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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I liked the picture, so I used it. Glad you enjoyed these Country lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Oh yes, they are lyrics! I like the photo too.
Comment from doggymad
Fantastic work Brett. No anger or bitterness just a few home truths.
So many women stay in bad situations with no way out. This to me is not just about the other man, but also the better one.
Thanks for sharing
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Fantastic work Brett. No anger or bitterness just a few home truths.
So many women stay in bad situations with no way out. This to me is not just about the other man, but also the better one.
Thanks for sharing
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little set of lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from RahulChadha
It really hurts when someone is the other man especially when someone puts so much of wfforts. Great poetry and surely deserves a 6
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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It really hurts when someone is the other man especially when someone puts so much of wfforts. Great poetry and surely deserves a 6
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Appreciate your comments, support, and the 6 Stars.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Bravo for your presentation with wordcrafting, I can see an attempt to offer 'resolution tips' for relationship in comatose. 'It takes two to tango' and faithfulness is of two folds. I love your flowing muse.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Bravo for your presentation with wordcrafting, I can see an attempt to offer 'resolution tips' for relationship in comatose. 'It takes two to tango' and faithfulness is of two folds. I love your flowing muse.
ola thomas
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Comment from c_lucas
The perfect murder. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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The perfect murder. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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There was no murder in this. Glad you enjoyed it any way.
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You're welcome. Brett. Charlie
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Brett. Sorry I haven't been around much of late mate. I've been battling this useless internet that won't stay connected for more than two minutes at a time.
This is a great little song and very well presented on here with a smashing picture. You are so talented in so many areas Sir and I always enjoy your work. Well done, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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G'day Brett. Sorry I haven't been around much of late mate. I've been battling this useless internet that won't stay connected for more than two minutes at a time.
This is a great little song and very well presented on here with a smashing picture. You are so talented in so many areas Sir and I always enjoy your work. Well done, cheers Fez
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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Too bad you are having Internet problems. Computers are okay for what they do, when they work. But, they do have a mind of their own. Glad you enjoyed this. Your comments and support appreciated.
