Love Victorious
5-7-5 Contest17 total reviews
Comment from Linda Engel
Amazing what a kiss will do to dissolve the woes that heavies your heart. Kisses spark such tingly feelings. Mike, you ol' softy. Nice photo chosen to compliment the mood.
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Amazing what a kiss will do to dissolve the woes that heavies your heart. Kisses spark such tingly feelings. Mike, you ol' softy. Nice photo chosen to compliment the mood.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
And so it should be, my friend! Excellent 5-7-5 contest entry, with lovely imagery, the last line really takes you to the stars! Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
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And so it should be, my friend! Excellent 5-7-5 contest entry, with lovely imagery, the last line really takes you to the stars! Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
Comment from CR Delport
I've been away for a while, busy with work and other things. I think I needed a break, but will ease back over the next few weeks. I did miss your writing though. This is well done. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
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I've been away for a while, busy with work and other things. I think I needed a break, but will ease back over the next few weeks. I did miss your writing though. This is well done. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2015
Comment from Spitfire
How true! That's why I kept falling in love as a teenager even if the feeling wasn't returned. Heck, I would find someone else and build a fantasy around him.
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How true! That's why I kept falling in love as a teenager even if the feeling wasn't returned. Heck, I would find someone else and build a fantasy around him.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, I love this...and that is the way to fall in love...with every part of your being...true love is just that kind of love...never to be forgotten...I so love your beautiful poem...and the picture speaks for itself...a beautiful 5-7-5 poem...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, I love this...and that is the way to fall in love...with every part of your being...true love is just that kind of love...never to be forgotten...I so love your beautiful poem...and the picture speaks for itself...a beautiful 5-7-5 poem...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from country ranch writer
THIS PICTURE IS FANTASTIC FOR YOUR PRESENTATION OF THIS ONE EMOTIONS EXPLAIN IT ALL YOUNG LOVE AT WORK HOW COULD THEY NOT BE IN LOVE
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THIS PICTURE IS FANTASTIC FOR YOUR PRESENTATION OF THIS ONE EMOTIONS EXPLAIN IT ALL YOUNG LOVE AT WORK HOW COULD THEY NOT BE IN LOVE
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from Neonewman
And some of us simply drown in it! Perfect artwork you have chosen to accompany this wonderfully crafted piece my friend.
God bless and good luck in the contest.
Steve
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And some of us simply drown in it! Perfect artwork you have chosen to accompany this wonderfully crafted piece my friend.
God bless and good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from Sasha
This is so beautifully written and I just love the artistic presentation. Impressive how you show the effect of her kiss with your tears becoming stars. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
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This is so beautifully written and I just love the artistic presentation. Impressive how you show the effect of her kiss with your tears becoming stars. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from elainec4
I thought your seventeen syllables worthy of six stars! You chose words wisely and presented them in a way that appealed to the reader. Your title and artwork tie it all together. elaine
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I thought your seventeen syllables worthy of six stars! You chose words wisely and presented them in a way that appealed to the reader. Your title and artwork tie it all together. elaine
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
Once again you have demonstrated, it is possible toake a powerful statement with a few well chosen words. An amazing last line. I don`t see this being beat!!
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Once again you have demonstrated, it is possible toake a powerful statement with a few well chosen words. An amazing last line. I don`t see this being beat!!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2015
