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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
My dad swallowed an open safety pin once, (don't ask) and my mum made him a cottonwool sandwich. He was fine after it passed! LOL Your story reminded me of that. I don't think my dad did it deliberately though!! LOL Another very funny one, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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My dad swallowed an open safety pin once, (don't ask) and my mum made him a cottonwool sandwich. He was fine after it passed! LOL Your story reminded me of that. I don't think my dad did it deliberately though!! LOL Another very funny one, Bill. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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I recall reading a news article about a bot who swallowed a half dozen small magnets. They were attracted to each other in his intestines and causing grief, so they were surgically removed.
Comment from Muffins
My stomach aches reading this. The top conversation and bottom conversation can both exist on their own. Is it strange that this left me with the giggles and a soar stomach?
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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My stomach aches reading this. The top conversation and bottom conversation can both exist on their own. Is it strange that this left me with the giggles and a soar stomach?
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2015
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hank you, Muffins, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from robyn corum
Ummmm....Bill?
What have YOU been eating lately? Spaghetti and Asparagus? Pizza and Pumpernickel? You gotta watch those bad dreams, man....
*smile*
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Ummmm....Bill?
What have YOU been eating lately? Spaghetti and Asparagus? Pizza and Pumpernickel? You gotta watch those bad dreams, man....
*smile*
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Thanks for giving this a look, Robyn. Bill
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Weren't Ben and Jerry famous for their ice cream? Would not want to be in this dude's position, swallowed razor blades? More power to him. Well written story. Like the humor thrown in for good measure too.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Weren't Ben and Jerry famous for their ice cream? Would not want to be in this dude's position, swallowed razor blades? More power to him. Well written story. Like the humor thrown in for good measure too.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Brett, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from sandragee
'Oh my God! Jerry! Are you insane?! We have to get you to surgery! Razor will slice through your intestines...' Let's hope the doctor sticks to Jerry's script and get him into surgery right away. A good piece of flash fiction.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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'Oh my God! Jerry! Are you insane?! We have to get you to surgery! Razor will slice through your intestines...' Let's hope the doctor sticks to Jerry's script and get him into surgery right away. A good piece of flash fiction.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Sandra, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from Eigle Rull
This was a well written post about a guy that wanted to clean out his colon by swallowing a bunch of razor blades. His doctor must be Swiss or German by the accent. The dialog was very good. I enjoyed reading it. It was excellent, my friend. Best wishes to you.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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This was a well written post about a guy that wanted to clean out his colon by swallowing a bunch of razor blades. His doctor must be Swiss or German by the accent. The dialog was very good. I enjoyed reading it. It was excellent, my friend. Best wishes to you.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Eigle, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Gloria ....
Totally quirky and weird and I love it! Where in the world do you come up with these zany ideas, Bill? Okay, you can let me in on it, and I promise I won't tell another person, okay?
I think a collection of this kind of material would make an excellent book, ya know?
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Totally quirky and weird and I love it! Where in the world do you come up with these zany ideas, Bill? Okay, you can let me in on it, and I promise I won't tell another person, okay?
I think a collection of this kind of material would make an excellent book, ya know?
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Gloria, for the positive review. I was hoping to get a short story collection out this summer, but life happened. Bill
Comment from Spitfire
Seems like Benny has an imaginary friend (?) somebody who would wish his harm. The first line clued me in that he's a mental cases. The doctor's accent another subtle hint. Razor blades cleaning out the colon. LOL
Love the last line.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Seems like Benny has an imaginary friend (?) somebody who would wish his harm. The first line clued me in that he's a mental cases. The doctor's accent another subtle hint. Razor blades cleaning out the colon. LOL
Love the last line.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Shari, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from Jay Squires
And, let me guess if Jerry is right. Whatever the result will be steaming on the floor, it should prove to be Ben & Jerry's flavor of the month!
So funny, Bill. Where in the freakin' universe did your reincarnation guide reach to pluck your imagination? Your stuff is off the wall!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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And, let me guess if Jerry is right. Whatever the result will be steaming on the floor, it should prove to be Ben & Jerry's flavor of the month!
So funny, Bill. Where in the freakin' universe did your reincarnation guide reach to pluck your imagination? Your stuff is off the wall!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Jay, for the enthusiastic and encouraging review. Bill
Comment from krys123
Bill;
-Well if he eats those razor blades He will be cleaning out more than is colon And that's for sure. What a bizarre short story. But I can see the humor in it.
-Thanks for sharing and posting this Bill and may the good Lord be with you always and for mostly Jerry.
Alex
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Bill;
-Well if he eats those razor blades He will be cleaning out more than is colon And that's for sure. What a bizarre short story. But I can see the humor in it.
-Thanks for sharing and posting this Bill and may the good Lord be with you always and for mostly Jerry.
Alex
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Alex, for the excellent review. Bill
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You are very welcome Bill
