Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Purr Fact Day"Dawn of Chaos
27 total reviews
Comment from Ballad man
Hi TPAC After reading your wonderful poem, I tried my hardest to understand it, but as a simple writer What I could make out of it is I got a kind of feeling of my heart which was so nice. When I read about the dog I felt for my own mischevious little dog and I kind of felt sorry for him. I enjoyed the read, my friend...thank you...Pete
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Hi TPAC After reading your wonderful poem, I tried my hardest to understand it, but as a simple writer What I could make out of it is I got a kind of feeling of my heart which was so nice. When I read about the dog I felt for my own mischevious little dog and I kind of felt sorry for him. I enjoyed the read, my friend...thank you...Pete
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Glad any aspect in my write found some appeal, suffering my faults in written conveyance, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I have read this poem four times. I almost skipped the review. Insread I looked at your portfolio to see the ratings from others. I'm astounded that this poem has received 5 stars. I can't make sense of the written words. There is no clear message. While not required, there's no rhyme. I'm disappointed you are not getting feedback that could benefit your writing.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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I have read this poem four times. I almost skipped the review. Insread I looked at your portfolio to see the ratings from others. I'm astounded that this poem has received 5 stars. I can't make sense of the written words. There is no clear message. While not required, there's no rhyme. I'm disappointed you are not getting feedback that could benefit your writing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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I thank you for your aiding words, knowing my writes have faults, doing revisions most accredited to reviewers response to writes. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Randa Dayle
Very nice poem. I can see how you got this one recognized. You gave the reader a wonderful experience. I am glad you shared your talent with us! Good job!!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Very nice poem. I can see how you got this one recognized. You gave the reader a wonderful experience. I am glad you shared your talent with us! Good job!!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Glad this particular write was able to connect to you, thanking you for your statement, generous rate and touching sentiments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, TPAC.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I enjoyed reading your poem,
especially as I got to the end!
-That was very good.
-Effective imagery throughout
your poem, and it also tells a story
about this "lioness."
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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-Very nice image, TPAC.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I enjoyed reading your poem,
especially as I got to the end!
-That was very good.
-Effective imagery throughout
your poem, and it also tells a story
about this "lioness."
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Glad aspects in this write were captivating to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
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You are very welcome, TPAC.
Comment from Malerie
"My self fate values a seal held sincerely..." this was an powerful read, the artwork brings light to this piece. Thanks for sharing this well written work. I had to read it a couple of times but I think I got it.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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"My self fate values a seal held sincerely..." this was an powerful read, the artwork brings light to this piece. Thanks for sharing this well written work. I had to read it a couple of times but I think I got it.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Glad aspects in this write were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Vicki Ziemer
I gave you 4 stars because, I think I understand that it is about a cat, out and stalking prey, but, I am not really sure. It is an interesting premise, but, I have a very hard time understanding they meaning. Some of the words don't make sense to me. It might just be me, but I would like to get more out of this piece. It seems very interesting, and has promise.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I gave you 4 stars because, I think I understand that it is about a cat, out and stalking prey, but, I am not really sure. It is an interesting premise, but, I have a very hard time understanding they meaning. Some of the words don't make sense to me. It might just be me, but I would like to get more out of this piece. It seems very interesting, and has promise.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I have revised this piece, pleased aspects were captivating to your interests, given revision might enhance its read. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from 24chas
I enjoyed this unique piece, TPAC. You have a creative voice and the way this one flowed was terrific. Plus you had great imagery. Nice work and keep on writing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I enjoyed this unique piece, TPAC. You have a creative voice and the way this one flowed was terrific. Plus you had great imagery. Nice work and keep on writing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Glad aspects in this write were found appealing, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A bit difficult to decipher the meaning here, but between the title and some key words such as lioness and jangling and two bulged eyeballs...I think you're talking about your loving pet cat...or may it's the dog? An interesting approach to a poetry write...but, perhaps, use more decipherable terms...?
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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A bit difficult to decipher the meaning here, but between the title and some key words such as lioness and jangling and two bulged eyeballs...I think you're talking about your loving pet cat...or may it's the dog? An interesting approach to a poetry write...but, perhaps, use more decipherable terms...?
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I feel you, hearing such flaws of coherency about them, performing constant revision to clear such doubts. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from TheStoryMan
Clever as read thru your mysterious words and try to decipher what the dog sees - is a huge magnificent beast of a cat stalking him thru the darkness until the sun reveals it's just a big stuffed harmless kitty - very imaginative indeed - bring back memories if being a child and every shadow we seen had us hiding under covers shaking until the sun came up - and a laugh and a snicker as we forgot we threw a sock or a shirt to give it some weird monster looking at us all night long - thanks for sharing your poem - respectfully Ron
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Clever as read thru your mysterious words and try to decipher what the dog sees - is a huge magnificent beast of a cat stalking him thru the darkness until the sun reveals it's just a big stuffed harmless kitty - very imaginative indeed - bring back memories if being a child and every shadow we seen had us hiding under covers shaking until the sun came up - and a laugh and a snicker as we forgot we threw a sock or a shirt to give it some weird monster looking at us all night long - thanks for sharing your poem - respectfully Ron
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I will state this unlike other reviews, given statements by you capture my intent fully, thinking further revisions can clear up shadows of doubt about its read. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Jaye Bennett
You chose a beautiful picture. I cannot, however, give more than four stars to a poem which is indecipherable. To me, it is necessary to write to where the reader can at least figure out what is being said. Sorry. You got a four simply because you did use good words.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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You chose a beautiful picture. I cannot, however, give more than four stars to a poem which is indecipherable. To me, it is necessary to write to where the reader can at least figure out what is being said. Sorry. You got a four simply because you did use good words.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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I get that a lot, breaking this barrier has become my conquest, falling due to improper grammar or flawed conveyances. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
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I really did like the words you used. They just weren't in an order I could understand. Keep writing. I think you have a lot to say.
