Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Finding Freedom"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
29 total reviews
Comment from I am Cat
A lovely thought... I think of balloons and the freedom
they have...but the environmentalists have ruined that
telling us that a fish or a bird will eat it and die.
:(
way to ruin my fairytale. :(
lol
Congrats on your win, Mikey... (and that FV... I just loved it) ;)
Cat
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A lovely thought... I think of balloons and the freedom
they have...but the environmentalists have ruined that
telling us that a fish or a bird will eat it and die.
:(
way to ruin my fairytale. :(
lol
Congrats on your win, Mikey... (and that FV... I just loved it) ;)
Cat
Comment Written 03-Oct-2015
Comment from evilynne
Congratulations on your win. I think your poem is marvelous. Letting a kite to and finds its way across the sky is a wonderful way to demonstrate freedom. Evi
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Congratulations on your win. I think your poem is marvelous. Letting a kite to and finds its way across the sky is a wonderful way to demonstrate freedom. Evi
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
Comment from Lovinia
Hello Mikey
Congratulations! Well done. You've captured the imagination of the reviewers and word format. A true AHA moment in your final line. I think the Lune is a precursor to the haiku. I love the long breath before releasing, adds an extra dimension to the phrase. Worthy of a six, used mine on the sonnet contest ... so many good ones. I do have one but saving for your latest post. Well done. Bask in the glory! Hugs - Lovi xoxoox
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Hello Mikey
Congratulations! Well done. You've captured the imagination of the reviewers and word format. A true AHA moment in your final line. I think the Lune is a precursor to the haiku. I love the long breath before releasing, adds an extra dimension to the phrase. Worthy of a six, used mine on the sonnet contest ... so many good ones. I do have one but saving for your latest post. Well done. Bask in the glory! Hugs - Lovi xoxoox
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
Comment from Leineco
Congrats to the Max, Michael! This is seductively clever! Great Job!!!
And well deserving go the win :-) :-) :-)
(it's well worth a six. . .but you won the $100., so I hope you don't mind if I horde my sixes)
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Congrats to the Max, Michael! This is seductively clever! Great Job!!!
And well deserving go the win :-) :-) :-)
(it's well worth a six. . .but you won the $100., so I hope you don't mind if I horde my sixes)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
Comment from Sankey
Congratulations. Lousy reward but then I guess you got the money hehe. Well done bro. I related to the short but to the point poem.Working real hard on this end to get my book all ready for the big REVIVE Certificate review in October the 2nd Anniversary of me putting it on here.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Congratulations. Lousy reward but then I guess you got the money hehe. Well done bro. I related to the short but to the point poem.Working real hard on this end to get my book all ready for the big REVIVE Certificate review in October the 2nd Anniversary of me putting it on here.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Ha! Should have reviewed it when It was paying $30.00 two weeks ago!!!
I'm famous now, you should be happy to read this for free. Hahahahahaha!! Looking forward to the big REVIVE. Wow. We're veterans here now. I have some I could revive too, but they ain't very good. :)) mikey
Comment from bard owl
Congratulations on your Lune Poetry Contest win. Your poem is amazing in its power to show the true meaning of freedom.
Blessings to you,
Linda
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Congratulations on your Lune Poetry Contest win. Your poem is amazing in its power to show the true meaning of freedom.
Blessings to you,
Linda
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Wow. Thank you so much. I'm delighted you enjoyed. Love all the stars. mikey
Comment from dragonpoet
This is so true. I like the space between the words in the last line to denote the space the kite is flying in.
It can also be by releasing a helium balloon and watching it disappear into the clouds. My son used to do that after every visit to Champs,
a sports bar which gave kids balloons.
Congrats on the win.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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This is so true. I like the space between the words in the last line to denote the space the kite is flying in.
It can also be by releasing a helium balloon and watching it disappear into the clouds. My son used to do that after every visit to Champs,
a sports bar which gave kids balloons.
Congrats on the win.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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That's probably something we should all do once in a while to remind us of what we felt like as kids.
We should all meet at Champs!!!
Thank you kindly. mikey
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You're welcome, Mikey.
Joan
Comment from MissMerri
Such a fantastic Lune! Not only do you express a unique thought in these few well-chosen words, but you illustrate your point so cleverly by letting the last word fly off into space. Ah Michael... You are truly one of the most creative writers around. I always enjoy your work. Oh! Congratulations on the first place finish in this contest! Not a surprise, really, but the blue ribbon is a nice finishing touch to your lovely Lune. ;")
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Such a fantastic Lune! Not only do you express a unique thought in these few well-chosen words, but you illustrate your point so cleverly by letting the last word fly off into space. Ah Michael... You are truly one of the most creative writers around. I always enjoy your work. Oh! Congratulations on the first place finish in this contest! Not a surprise, really, but the blue ribbon is a nice finishing touch to your lovely Lune. ;")
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. What a wonderful review from one of my very favorite writers. You are one I'm most likely to say, "YES, exactly" after reading one of your works. :)
Thank you so much. I'm smiling and blushing. Mr. Cool, huh. mikey
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Wow! I'm so honored to know you count me among your favorite writers. That's awesome. I would say the same about you. I'm glad you came to FanStory. Keep the good works flowing!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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SHOCK! Sometimes I think maybe one of my entries has a chance for something. :) But not this time. It didn't even enter my mind.
Thank you so much. mikey
Comment from CR Delport
Work is still keeping me awfully busy at the moment, but I hope things will get back to normal by next week. As always, this is very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Work is still keeping me awfully busy at the moment, but I hope things will get back to normal by next week. As always, this is very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2015
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Glad you liked. I fully understand as you can see by my late response. I wish I was busy with WRITING! I don't find the real world all that interesting. :)) mikey
