Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "The Thought of I"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from winnona
A well-written piece your words flow easily combining well and forming the message for the reader. Your well-chosen artwork completed the piece well. A interesting piece
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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A well-written piece your words flow easily combining well and forming the message for the reader. Your well-chosen artwork completed the piece well. A interesting piece
Comment Written 14-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Glad aspects of this write was found pleasing to your interests. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Badger_29
Intriguing free from. I looked for and enjoyed what rhymes there were. I was sceptical at first , but you caught and held my attention. A bit weird with the flow, I had to read it three times. Quite thought provoking. Darren
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Intriguing free from. I looked for and enjoyed what rhymes there were. I was sceptical at first , but you caught and held my attention. A bit weird with the flow, I had to read it three times. Quite thought provoking. Darren
Comment Written 14-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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My way of expression seems to attract attention, writes giving readers trouble in defining them, them holding the need to read more than once. More revisions upon writes. Thanking you for generous rate and helpful statement.
Comment from busses
This is an interesting piece! I feel if I got the jist of this you are engaging to many opinions of outsiders! I the end as it's so often put, You need to follow who YOU are not who THEY think you should be. This is well written
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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This is an interesting piece! I feel if I got the jist of this you are engaging to many opinions of outsiders! I the end as it's so often put, You need to follow who YOU are not who THEY think you should be. This is well written
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Great insights about this presentation, seems its path to you has a special defining: wonderful. Thanking you for generous rate and touching views.
Comment from BruceMiller
I'm sorry; I'm totally confused. I first assumed that I was reading English, but then I wasn't sure. I believe that the basic goal of writing is communication. I don't understand what you are trying to say.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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I'm sorry; I'm totally confused. I first assumed that I was reading English, but then I wasn't sure. I believe that the basic goal of writing is communication. I don't understand what you are trying to say.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Feelings are difficult to express and at times concepts hard to hear. My first poor rate I feel more comfortable here then excellent. Will consider your thoughts and appreciate given views. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments.
Comment from foxangie123
A really neat picture and title to start out. A great set of lines to top it all of. As the reader one can both relate and feel the emotion that is awesome. Kudos to you..
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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A really neat picture and title to start out. A great set of lines to top it all of. As the reader one can both relate and feel the emotion that is awesome. Kudos to you..
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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A reader with an eye for thrills. Glad this write gave you a journey hopefully a smooth course. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed opinion.
Comment from Ricky1024
in your shirt script PC talk about dreams among many other things dreams are our subconscious thoughts and wishes desires and sometimes pains which turned into nightmares whenever I dream I think about it for a few minutes and wonder if it's worth writing on putting down on paper and then presented on the site or one of the many other sites which I have done many times and I've actually create a book of dreams called my book of dreams which sits on a desk someplace lost among the other many hundreds of books to await publishing have a nice Valentines Day 24 out
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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in your shirt script PC talk about dreams among many other things dreams are our subconscious thoughts and wishes desires and sometimes pains which turned into nightmares whenever I dream I think about it for a few minutes and wonder if it's worth writing on putting down on paper and then presented on the site or one of the many other sites which I have done many times and I've actually create a book of dreams called my book of dreams which sits on a desk someplace lost among the other many hundreds of books to await publishing have a nice Valentines Day 24 out
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Good to have dreams, but better fulfillments of those aims. I have works too. Not any paid success stories. Glad we can share points. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements.
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Comment from DonandVicki
It is quite obvious to me that you spent a considerable amount of time compiling all of this information for your well composed poetic/scientific post.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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It is quite obvious to me that you spent a considerable amount of time compiling all of this information for your well composed poetic/scientific post.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Yeah. Mad scientists do things like that. Revisions are my big interests: me making these notes to sing. Thanking you for generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Liberty Justice
WOW! SIX STARS my dear dear poet. YOU HAVE A GOD-GiVEN GIFT. You have been touched by the spirit. You held my soul spellbound. I feel your pains and sufferings running rampant. You desperately trying to loose yourself from hell's
grips. Your metaphors, alliterations and perdlsonifications are so raw and life daring. liberty justice
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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WOW! SIX STARS my dear dear poet. YOU HAVE A GOD-GiVEN GIFT. You have been touched by the spirit. You held my soul spellbound. I feel your pains and sufferings running rampant. You desperately trying to loose yourself from hell's
grips. Your metaphors, alliterations and perdlsonifications are so raw and life daring. liberty justice
Comment Written 04-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Glad you found interests in this write. Thanking you for too generous rate but welcomed comments about this work.
Comment from RoseAnderson
Oh this is very nice. I love the way the "I" plays here, as if each I signifies he firming of thoughts. I really like this evocative bit: I went without them, me walking in their cage: cautiously I went life's rough rigid course.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Oh this is very nice. I love the way the "I" plays here, as if each I signifies he firming of thoughts. I really like this evocative bit: I went without them, me walking in their cage: cautiously I went life's rough rigid course.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Thanking you for your generous rate with delighting thoughts about this write.
Comment from Teri7
This is very good what you have written. You used a lot of great descriptive wording and it was so full of the way we, as humans, are today unless we get saved by Jesus. This was a six star write to me. Great job. Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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This is very good what you have written. You used a lot of great descriptive wording and it was so full of the way we, as humans, are today unless we get saved by Jesus. This was a six star write to me. Great job. Teri
Comment Written 28-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Thanking you for over generous rate, something very rare with my pitted writes, glad you found delight in this conveyance.
