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Comment from Bill Schott
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This two-ten-two, A syllable dilemma, does indeed carry the proscribed syllable count and seems to be concerned with just that. Success!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
    Thanks Bill for reading and giving this a review much appreciated. Yes I may have this right at last lol Cheers
Comment from angel123
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Clever writing very appropriate subject for this poetry contest. I enjoyed reading your poem and it flows with humor. Nice artwork choice.

Angel123

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
    thanks angel123 for your great review and yes I liked this image too took me a while to find one that I thought would fit this little poem glad you agree Cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
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Humorous and true. I think we are all getting pretty good at syllable count as we have to do it almost every day. A good entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Thanks BeasPeas have a bit of in with one ang getting better, lol. Glad you read and reviewed this Post appreciate you comments Cheers
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Thanks BeasPeas have a bit of in with one ang getting better, lol. Glad you read and reviewed this Post appreciate you comments Cheers
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous,
LOL I can identify with this little poem. I have a hard time from time to time. I double check using an internet site called= http://howmanysyllables.com/

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Hi Gypsy Blue Rose, Yes there are several sites and sometimes gets confusing, however just the title of the contest led me to have a bit of fun with this one. Thanks for reading it Cheers
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a spot on line and syllable count. LOL - indeed you do so mission accomplished with this one. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Hi Mystic Angel. I am glad that I have made the mission and had fun at the same time. Appreciate your comments and best wishes. Cheers
Comment from ellie6
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Yes, you got the syllable count right. Not easy to do with a 10 syllable middle line, I can identify with the problem. You nailed it , well done.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Thanks ellie6 for reading this latest effort. A bit of fun but I do have some difficulty getting it right at times despite syllable counters etc.lol with thanks again and Cheers
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition, Lol, you have got the syllable count right this time, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Thank you Eric is is much appreciated your comments and best wishes. Also glad the syllables are right lol Cheers
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Thank you Eric is is much appreciated your comments and best wishes. Also glad the syllables are right lol Cheers
reply by Eric1 on 30-Jul-2015
    You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Jackarrie
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Well you can stop worrying because your syllable count is perfect. well done I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Thank you Jackarrie for your review and great rating and good wishes . I think I have it right this time lol Cheers
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
    Thank you Jackarrie for your review and great rating and good wishes . I think I have it right this time lol Cheers