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Comment from Mary H-W
I needn't ask you the obvious question, so I'll just go on to say, Why not?
Why not say it's a nice, easy to read, thought provoking, chuckleworthy little nonrhyming read. I like it for it's simplicity and nonsimplicity.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I needn't ask you the obvious question, so I'll just go on to say, Why not?
Why not say it's a nice, easy to read, thought provoking, chuckleworthy little nonrhyming read. I like it for it's simplicity and nonsimplicity.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Mary, for the discerning review. Bill
Comment from hannahorion
Haiku 5-7-5 form: Title:Yellow Allamanda. Comment : Yellow allamanda is a toxic plant. The name allamanda means "Heavenly Chief". Perhaps the writer is wondering why they are looking at it in order to eat it? Perhaps just its beauty is why it is being looked at? It is not known all that is known is that it is looked at and wondering why? This is a puzzling poem which stirs the mind into questions. I enjoyed it and gave it five stars.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Haiku 5-7-5 form: Title:Yellow Allamanda. Comment : Yellow allamanda is a toxic plant. The name allamanda means "Heavenly Chief". Perhaps the writer is wondering why they are looking at it in order to eat it? Perhaps just its beauty is why it is being looked at? It is not known all that is known is that it is looked at and wondering why? This is a puzzling poem which stirs the mind into questions. I enjoyed it and gave it five stars.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, hannahorion, for the excellent review. Bill
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