Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 262 "Sunny Day Play"Small and Specialty Poems
8 total reviews
Comment from rod007
I can imagine the cool water on this hot summer day through your rhyming and words portraying a lazy summer day under the shade. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
I can imagine the cool water on this hot summer day through your rhyming and words portraying a lazy summer day under the shade. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
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Thank you rod. The water is a good choice too.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Bravo!
A well written Inverted Sonnet which depicts a typical summer day to perfection.
The poem is focused on the chosen theme and follows the written guidelines.
WOW! A little bit too confusing for me right now BUT maybe another time I wll try this style.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
Bravo!
A well written Inverted Sonnet which depicts a typical summer day to perfection.
The poem is focused on the chosen theme and follows the written guidelines.
WOW! A little bit too confusing for me right now BUT maybe another time I wll try this style.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Shirley. I an confident that you can do it justice.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Fantastic work, and another form of poem, I might be confident with. I am going to take some time again, this weekend to sharpen up my weak points. Thank you once again, for your patience and helpful way, you are helping me to better myself, and my work.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
Fantastic work, and another form of poem, I might be confident with. I am going to take some time again, this weekend to sharpen up my weak points. Thank you once again, for your patience and helpful way, you are helping me to better myself, and my work.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Sandra. I like that. It majes my effort worth it.
Comment from Joan E.
I don't think I've ever read an Inverted Sonnet before. I enjoyed it and your special rhyme scheme plus the sunny day at the lake. Here's to the "cooling shade" and "fresh-cut grass"! Thanks for your informative notes about Modern Sonnets as well--yours is certainly appealing. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
I don't think I've ever read an Inverted Sonnet before. I enjoyed it and your special rhyme scheme plus the sunny day at the lake. Here's to the "cooling shade" and "fresh-cut grass"! Thanks for your informative notes about Modern Sonnets as well--yours is certainly appealing. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Joan. Glad you liked it all.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. I enjoyed your inverted/modern Sonnet. It starts wit the concluding couplet. The rest follows your indicated rhyme scheme. I might try one soon.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. I enjoyed your inverted/modern Sonnet. It starts wit the concluding couplet. The rest follows your indicated rhyme scheme. I might try one soon.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you Ine. Yes, please do, give it a go.
Comment from Pantygynt
Well I must be getting better. I read the poem first worked it out an inverted sonnet and the iambic tetrameter which is always an easy calming meter very suitable for this content. We have different ways of enjoying the pleasant weather with two stanzas devoted to the sunshine and volta, pretty much where you'd expect it to be in the eleventh line, the inversion precluding its appearance in the ninth, althought that might be an interesting place to replace it in. Yes I see what you mean by breaking the rules. Like the ones we used to break at school, can be fun!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
Well I must be getting better. I read the poem first worked it out an inverted sonnet and the iambic tetrameter which is always an easy calming meter very suitable for this content. We have different ways of enjoying the pleasant weather with two stanzas devoted to the sunshine and volta, pretty much where you'd expect it to be in the eleventh line, the inversion precluding its appearance in the ninth, althought that might be an interesting place to replace it in. Yes I see what you mean by breaking the rules. Like the ones we used to break at school, can be fun!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Yes, you know, kids these days. What can I tell you.
Comment from Gunner Lil
A very refreshing poem that had the reader remembering
the childhood days.
An easy read with a nice pace.
The images that you painted were great.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
A very refreshing poem that had the reader remembering
the childhood days.
An easy read with a nice pace.
The images that you painted were great.
Thank you!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you Gunner Lil.
Comment from His Grayness
Very nice work here with an excellent photograph, very meaningful writers notes to offer great education to many of us and overall, a delightful work. My thanks to the author for the nice read and the rich poetic style lesson! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
Very nice work here with an excellent photograph, very meaningful writers notes to offer great education to many of us and overall, a delightful work. My thanks to the author for the nice read and the rich poetic style lesson! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you Vance. My pleasure.