Little Poems
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6 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an amazing photo, Tom, your photography is of a professional standard. I enjoyed your poem as well, and as usual the pairing is perfect. :) Sandra. xsx
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
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What an amazing photo, Tom, your photography is of a professional standard. I enjoyed your poem as well, and as usual the pairing is perfect. :) Sandra. xsx
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
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Thank you Sandra. I really appreciate the compliment.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Great poem. I can see the pattern and why it is called butterfly cinquain. If a person use this form should it be about a butterfly or insects or can it be any subject?
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Great poem. I can see the pattern and why it is called butterfly cinquain. If a person use this form should it be about a butterfly or insects or can it be any subject?
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Thank you Sandra. It can be used fir any subject, Sandra. I just thought it would be great for pa Butterfly poem.
Comment from artemis53
Oh how very beautiful. I live the simple elegance of nature and you have put a piece of it down in writing. It's truly a very comfortable and soft poem.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Oh how very beautiful. I live the simple elegance of nature and you have put a piece of it down in writing. It's truly a very comfortable and soft poem.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much Artemis. It is a unique and lovely format.
Comment from Pantygynt
An excellent form for the subject. Your carefully chosen words bring a pleasing symmetry to the shape of the final poem that is indeed redolent of a butterfly. Accompanied also by a lovely close up of one of these beautiful creatures.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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An excellent form for the subject. Your carefully chosen words bring a pleasing symmetry to the shape of the final poem that is indeed redolent of a butterfly. Accompanied also by a lovely close up of one of these beautiful creatures.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I am very glad you liked the form and composition.
Comment from Joan E.
Ah, a Butterfly Cinquain and a creature poem in one post! We actually see Monarchs in So Cal too--thanks for your well-focused shot. I relished your linked cinquains with the delightful pattern, along with your added rhymes. Happy Independence Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Ah, a Butterfly Cinquain and a creature poem in one post! We actually see Monarchs in So Cal too--thanks for your well-focused shot. I relished your linked cinquains with the delightful pattern, along with your added rhymes. Happy Independence Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Thank you Joan , happy Sunday to you too.
Comment from rod007
Your appreciation of the beauty of butterflies and their assorted brilliant colours is reflected in this poem. And they like us love the nectar as we love the honey. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Your appreciation of the beauty of butterflies and their assorted brilliant colours is reflected in this poem. And they like us love the nectar as we love the honey. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Thank you rod. Yes, the honey.
