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Comment from --Turtle.
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I read through this acrostic and thought it was really cute. It was Smooth, there was great flow and consistency through the lines all in line with the topic of the paranoia. Great humor too!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your lovely review - your comments are always very much appreciated!
    Craig
Comment from I am Cat
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Your sense of humor makes me laugh
(I suppose that was the point of it, eh?)

If you have a tinfoil hat, will you sit by my television?
I think my reception isn't so great.
Yeah, thanks.

this was fun with perfect timing and rhyming.
I loved it (and I don't generally care for acrostics)
is the contest over? or... what?
if not, good luck!
Cat

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
    Hi Cat,

    No, I think it closes in a couple of days - so thanks for your good wishes.

    Do you think I'd get a good reception at your house?

    Always appreciate having you go over my stuff - thanks again - Craig :)
reply by I am Cat on 15-Jun-2015
    You have more stuff?
    I'll go over it! :)
    Keep shoveling it out... I'll keep coming back for more. :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
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U-h-h-h-h-h-h-h, sir? I believe I've found what you're looking for. But, I'd rather not tell you where it is. "THEY" might be listening, heh-heh.

Funny stuff, Craig. Good luck in the New Arrival contest with these acrostic antics

~Dean

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
    Thanks so much, Dean - I'm glad you found it amusing. Please destroy this comment after reading :) Craig.
reply by Dean Kuch on 15-Jun-2015
    Ha-ha, won't it self-destruct on it's own? Oh, by the way, you might want to start running...

    Heh-heh-heh...
Comment from lalajovanoski
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this is by far one of the most uniquely written poems for the new arrival contest
This is such an amazingly written, finely composed piece. You are very talented. Thank you very much for sharing this, I truly enjoyed reading. I look forward to reading more from you!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
    Thank you (again) for your kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Craig
Comment from ~Dovey
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Speaking of cheeky! :) I was quite amused by this humorous piece. Your choice of artwork sets it off nicely. I am sure this will be an original entry for the New arrivals poetry contest and it is written in perfect Acrostic form. Bonus, it even rhymes! Excellent work! I'm wishing you all the best in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
    Thanks for your good wishes and your encouragement, Dovey. Your opinion is always greatly valued :) Craig