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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great photo.
-I love eagles and follow a pair on Alcoa's Davenport, Iowa cam. They are a very devoted pair, and it is hard not to admire their beauty and grace.
-Your poem is definitely humorous.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015
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-Great photo.
-I love eagles and follow a pair on Alcoa's Davenport, Iowa cam. They are a very devoted pair, and it is hard not to admire their beauty and grace.
-Your poem is definitely humorous.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2015
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Thank youn respa1
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You are welcome.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Don't you just love the eagles? We have seen a few nesting eagles where we live. Their nests are the size of condos. Indeed it looks massive and intimidating. I never thought of it as uncomfortable! As usual, love your photos that accompany your poetry. Good job, Tom.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Don't you just love the eagles? We have seen a few nesting eagles where we live. Their nests are the size of condos. Indeed it looks massive and intimidating. I never thought of it as uncomfortable! As usual, love your photos that accompany your poetry. Good job, Tom.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you. Yes. They nest is huge. They are very interesting birds.
Comment from rod007
This poem reminds me of times when I sit on my chair writing. My ass gets sore but maybe like the eagle on her nest, I am sitting on little treasures of writing that'll hatch soon into either gems or just plain stones. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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This poem reminds me of times when I sit on my chair writing. My ass gets sore but maybe like the eagle on her nest, I am sitting on little treasures of writing that'll hatch soon into either gems or just plain stones. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you rod. Maybe a cushion would help.
Comment from Selina Stambi
The rules made my head swim, but the content ... love it!
The stick would do that, right?
I'm fascinated by eagles. I've done a lot of research on them. They are incredible birds.
Cute and clever!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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The rules made my head swim, but the content ... love it!
The stick would do that, right?
I'm fascinated by eagles. I've done a lot of research on them. They are incredible birds.
Cute and clever!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you Sonali. That shot was from 200 yards away.
Comment from Angel Debbie
eagle sitting with her chick
rumps get sore real quick
on a stick
Try to say this ten times quick! Yep my rump would get real sore to if I had to sit in a nest for to long. Love the write.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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eagle sitting with her chick
rumps get sore real quick
on a stick
Try to say this ten times quick! Yep my rump would get real sore to if I had to sit in a nest for to long. Love the write.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Angel Debbie. Glad you enjoyed the humor and i really enjoyed getting the stars.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! Tom, that is so funny. I can only assume they have toughened bottoms!! Amazing photo of the eagle and her young, you must have a good camera to get that close a shot. A pleasure to read and admire. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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LOL! Tom, that is so funny. I can only assume they have toughened bottoms!! Amazing photo of the eagle and her young, you must have a good camera to get that close a shot. A pleasure to read and admire. :) Sandra
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Sandra. They must be tough. Lol.
Comment from Joan E.
That's how I felt about the storks up in the stories-high nests in Portugal! Thank you for introducing me to the "Hailezaine"--I must have missed the contest in 2014. I enjoyed your fun and mono-verse rhyme and amazing picture of mother eagle and her chick. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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That's how I felt about the storks up in the stories-high nests in Portugal! Thank you for introducing me to the "Hailezaine"--I must have missed the contest in 2014. I enjoyed your fun and mono-verse rhyme and amazing picture of mother eagle and her chick. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Joan. I bet eagles and storks have a lot in common, lol.
Comment from I am Cat
I love taking photos of eagles... when I lived in Alaska, I took some nice ones.. but nicer ones when I went back about 15 years later... (mostly because my skills had improved and so had my equipment) lol
They have some amazing shots to get down on the Homer Spit in Southern Alaska...
Anyway... back to the poetry, which is why we are here, eh? lol
(seems we share TWO passions) :)
The person who will not smile at the mention of the word "rump" will never be a friend to me. :)
I smiled right away when I read it... and on a stick? really?
Do you ever watch Jeff Dunham with his character, "Jose Jalepeno on a Stick"? lol
(he looks quite uncomfortable sitting on a stick as well) lol
This is an interesting format... I enjoyed the poem.
Well done,
Cat
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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I love taking photos of eagles... when I lived in Alaska, I took some nice ones.. but nicer ones when I went back about 15 years later... (mostly because my skills had improved and so had my equipment) lol
They have some amazing shots to get down on the Homer Spit in Southern Alaska...
Anyway... back to the poetry, which is why we are here, eh? lol
(seems we share TWO passions) :)
The person who will not smile at the mention of the word "rump" will never be a friend to me. :)
I smiled right away when I read it... and on a stick? really?
Do you ever watch Jeff Dunham with his character, "Jose Jalepeno on a Stick"? lol
(he looks quite uncomfortable sitting on a stick as well) lol
This is an interesting format... I enjoyed the poem.
Well done,
Cat
Comment Written 13-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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Thank you, I am Cat. Yes, i love Jeff Dunham and his puppets. I'm glad you weren't rumpled.
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lol... (ok, that made me giggle too)
what is it about that word? lol
:)
Comment from Pantygynt
They probably line the inside of the nest with all kinds of luxurious stuff. Might even have a waterbed in there for all we know. Neat little verse foerm though and it relies onb a good punch line to set it off, like you have given it.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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They probably line the inside of the nest with all kinds of luxurious stuff. Might even have a waterbed in there for all we know. Neat little verse foerm though and it relies onb a good punch line to set it off, like you have given it.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt.
Comment from mermaids
I agree, it must be uncomfortable sitting on those sticks. Love this poem about mother eagle and her world. Chick, quick and stick are excellent rhyming words that create a clear picture and make this a fun poem to read out loud.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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I agree, it must be uncomfortable sitting on those sticks. Love this poem about mother eagle and her world. Chick, quick and stick are excellent rhyming words that create a clear picture and make this a fun poem to read out loud.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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Thank you mermaids.
