Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 248 "Find Joy"Small and Specialty Poems
12 total reviews
Comment from Angel Debbie
A mouthful said here in your poetic words.
Someone had fun dressing this scarecrow in a suit. That's what make the season fun to enjoy. the artistry of all kinds. Great picture thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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A mouthful said here in your poetic words.
Someone had fun dressing this scarecrow in a suit. That's what make the season fun to enjoy. the artistry of all kinds. Great picture thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Angel Debbie. Yes, i liked that guy. He expressed exactly what I wanted to project. Nice suit too.
Comment from rod007
A great poem for thought. My joy is writing, however bad it is. I am an addict and it is better than alcohol or crack--such joy. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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A great poem for thought. My joy is writing, however bad it is. I am an addict and it is better than alcohol or crack--such joy. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you rod. So important to find things that give you joy.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading your poem. Good rhyme and even flow. Excellent word choice to enhance the theme. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Good rhyme and even flow. Excellent word choice to enhance the theme. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading and responding.
Comment from lakeport
Find joy, indeed life should be enjoyed, it move by much to fast, I enjoyed reading the poem. God bless you. Lakeport.....
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Find joy, indeed life should be enjoyed, it move by much to fast, I enjoyed reading the poem. God bless you. Lakeport.....
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Lakeport.
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you are very welcome. Lakeport.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Nice one, Tom, the rhyme scheme work beautifully for your poem, the words sang out to me. There is so much out there to make everyone happy, we just have to open our eyes to see it. Excellent advice, my friend. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Nice one, Tom, the rhyme scheme work beautifully for your poem, the words sang out to me. There is so much out there to make everyone happy, we just have to open our eyes to see it. Excellent advice, my friend. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Sandra. That is swell that you likes it so well.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your over-brimming creativity with us. I enjoyed your new form filled with appealing exhortations, rhymes and repeats. I liked the pattern and the joy you captured in your photograph. Cheers and happy weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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Thank you for sharing your over-brimming creativity with us. I enjoyed your new form filled with appealing exhortations, rhymes and repeats. I liked the pattern and the joy you captured in your photograph. Cheers and happy weekend- Joan
Comment Written 13-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2015
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Thank you Joan. Where you off to next?
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We have never been to Norway--so, we booked a cruise from Norway to Iceland at the end of July! It should be fascinating to compare to December's journey to Antarctica--and cruising is so much easier than the land treks--especially over all the cobblestone sidewalks in Iberia! Smiles- Joan
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
this is an interesting structure you have come up with. this poem certainly has a good flow to it. The sentiments expressed within are also admirable.
Very nicely penned
GMG
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Hi there,
this is an interesting structure you have come up with. this poem certainly has a good flow to it. The sentiments expressed within are also admirable.
Very nicely penned
GMG
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you GMG
Comment from flamingstar
Here's one I can relate to! Joy is where you find it, which is pretty much everywhere when you shift your perspective. It's the Law of Attraction in action, really. The more joy you perceive, the more will come your way.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Here's one I can relate to! Joy is where you find it, which is pretty much everywhere when you shift your perspective. It's the Law of Attraction in action, really. The more joy you perceive, the more will come your way.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you flamingstar. Yes, that is really true.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is certainly a form to play around with here is the antidote to all that happiness and get up and go. With tongue firmly in cheek then:
Turn in
When you feel shattered and tired out,
Confused, what are we all about?
Too quiet! Don't dare to raise a shout
About your pain
Been hurt again?
So much of poetry is sad,
Bewailing misery gone mad,
Little about which to feel glad.
It's raining hard,
Floods our back yard.
Turn in.
I enjoyed that - hop you did!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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This is certainly a form to play around with here is the antidote to all that happiness and get up and go. With tongue firmly in cheek then:
Turn in
When you feel shattered and tired out,
Confused, what are we all about?
Too quiet! Don't dare to raise a shout
About your pain
Been hurt again?
So much of poetry is sad,
Bewailing misery gone mad,
Little about which to feel glad.
It's raining hard,
Floods our back yard.
Turn in.
I enjoyed that - hop you did!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I sure did. You got it, by Jove.
Comment from MissMerri
I very much enjoyed this 12 Line Exhortation. It has a happy lilt to it and the words are truly good advice. My only complaint would be that in lines seven and eight you seem to have a slight irregularity when you say "That's sitting right before you eyes" referring to chances, which is plural. Therefore "That is" would not be grammatically correct. You could say, "now sitting" or "some sitting" or somehow eliminate the contraction. I'm sure you can think of a way because you are quite a talented writer, obviously, to create this clever form of poetry. I do like this very much and hope there can be a solution to this miniscule problem.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I very much enjoyed this 12 Line Exhortation. It has a happy lilt to it and the words are truly good advice. My only complaint would be that in lines seven and eight you seem to have a slight irregularity when you say "That's sitting right before you eyes" referring to chances, which is plural. Therefore "That is" would not be grammatically correct. You could say, "now sitting" or "some sitting" or somehow eliminate the contraction. I'm sure you can think of a way because you are quite a talented writer, obviously, to create this clever form of poetry. I do like this very much and hope there can be a solution to this miniscule problem.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you MissMerri, ill cogitate on that.
