Little Poems
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Comment from Angel Debbie
Novocaine,
Sends signals to the brain.
A trait dentists use to constrain
Pain.
So true are your words of this write. I don't care for dentists they are way to expensive no matter how much Novocaine they give me, the look of the bill still hurts! lol
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Novocaine,
Sends signals to the brain.
A trait dentists use to constrain
Pain.
So true are your words of this write. I don't care for dentists they are way to expensive no matter how much Novocaine they give me, the look of the bill still hurts! lol
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you Angel Debbie. I agree. The real pain comes when you get their bill.
Comment from rod007
Who goes to a dentist and not get pain, I went to clean my teeth a month ago and it was a grinding irritation, it is life. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Who goes to a dentist and not get pain, I went to clean my teeth a month ago and it was a grinding irritation, it is life. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you rod. I never get pain from my dentist.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
A very fun format for poetry, Tom. Interesting you'd chose a dental theme. A couple years ago I had a root canal and the area was so hyper-sensitive that novocaine didn't work. Not a great experience. Thanks for reminding me of that. LOL
Seriously, a fun poem!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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A very fun format for poetry, Tom. Interesting you'd chose a dental theme. A couple years ago I had a root canal and the area was so hyper-sensitive that novocaine didn't work. Not a great experience. Thanks for reminding me of that. LOL
Seriously, a fun poem!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2015
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Thank you. I just had 2 fillings and my brother had a tooth pulled.
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So all things dental were on your mind!
Comment from Pantygynt
I don't think you have stretched things too far. If the absence of pain is the opposite of pain then that which brings about the absence of pain must surely be seen as antonym of pain even if a philosopher might disagree. Even with the novocaine I can't stand them fiddling about in there!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I don't think you have stretched things too far. If the absence of pain is the opposite of pain then that which brings about the absence of pain must surely be seen as antonym of pain even if a philosopher might disagree. Even with the novocaine I can't stand them fiddling about in there!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Yeah i hear you. Today, the pain cones afterwards, when you get the Bill.
Comment from ProjectBluebook
No pain -- no gain. the opposite of pain is pleasure, let the truth be known. Appreciate author notes. Hope there ain't no flies in the office? Guess, protein would be a plus. wackydo
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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No pain -- no gain. the opposite of pain is pleasure, let the truth be known. Appreciate author notes. Hope there ain't no flies in the office? Guess, protein would be a plus. wackydo
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thankyou wackadydo. hah, good point.
Comment from GregoryCody
I think that works fine! See, I love when writers take you on a different journey than what was expected. I get it! Great piece, great great title.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I think that works fine! See, I love when writers take you on a different journey than what was expected. I get it! Great piece, great great title.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you Gregory.
Comment from Joan E.
I hope "Robina" read you poem--based on her recent post, she faces some serious dental work. I liked your use of the Antonym form for this message and your addition of rhymes. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I hope "Robina" read you poem--based on her recent post, she faces some serious dental work. I liked your use of the Antonym form for this message and your addition of rhymes. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you Joan. Yeah, i remember her post. Actually my brother had a tooth pulled yesterday, and that was my muse.
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Poor thing--I hope he's not in much pain, along with Robina! -J
Comment from lalajovanoski
I TRULY ENJOYED READING THIS FINELY COMPOSED, WELL WRITTEN PIECE. NICELY CONVEYED AND THE MESSAGE IS WELL RECEIVED. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED. KEEP ON WRITING!!
Thank you very much for sharing this, as I truly enjoyed reading this. God Bless you!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I TRULY ENJOYED READING THIS FINELY COMPOSED, WELL WRITTEN PIECE. NICELY CONVEYED AND THE MESSAGE IS WELL RECEIVED. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED. KEEP ON WRITING!!
Thank you very much for sharing this, as I truly enjoyed reading this. God Bless you!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you lalajovaniski.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
I love the flow of the poem, it is short and say what is needed to say, without stretching it out. The rhyming gives you a feeling of rhythm and I get a feeling of relaxation.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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I love the flow of the poem, it is short and say what is needed to say, without stretching it out. The rhyming gives you a feeling of rhythm and I get a feeling of relaxation.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2015
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Thank you Sandra, yes, nono sine should indeed have that effect.
