Comment from risktaker

Excellent

I believe in angels and I am grateful for their influence on my life.I like the word choice and the message.The rhyme and word choice is entertaining and uplifting.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thank you risktaker.

reply by risktaker on 03-Jun-2015

thanks

reply by risktaker on 03-Jun-2015

ok

Comment from rod007

Excellent

AN interesting spiritual thought, using the statue to make your prayer-plea stronger with the angel's prayer. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you rod. Some of us need all the help we can get.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a fun format I think with you as well. I hope you have entered or plan to enter the contest. Watch out Roswell, NM fan story is going to be the place to see flying sauces. And we are not aliens either, a bit crazy maybe! LOL Patricia

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you Patricia. Yes, I am having fun with these, and did enter one. Although it does not have a UFO theme, i hope that doesn't hurt it. I also wrote two more to post tomorrow.

reply by patcelaw on 31-May-2015

I hope people when they vote realize they could be written on any subject not just UFO.

Comment from flamingstar

Excellent

You could sponsor a contest on this theme! Angels surround us and are always eager to help when we ask for it. Of course, "help" doesn't always come in the form we expect or demand. They have the big picture in front of them and ultimate outcomes must serve the highest good of all concerned:)

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you Flaming Star, well said.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I like the way you get rhyme into these saucers. I know you said its not a requirement but, like the acrostics, they work even better when its there. Just my opinion is all.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you Pantygynt. Yes, I tolally agree. They add to the poetic feel.

reply by the author on 31-May-2015

BTW, i also posted a mono-rhymed one today with a rhyme scheme named Little Geese, that has a scheme of: AaaA1aaA., but is posted in a blind contest, so you didn't get the notice, I'm sure. Tomorrow, ill post one with an abababa scheme that is stacked to provide the illusion of a totem pole. Then I'll be done pkaying with this format.

reply by Pantygynt on 31-May-2015

But I have reviewed it. My Crown is up on P1