Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello. Excellent flow and rhythm. I really enjoyed reading the word play that you have penned here. You breathed life into these little geese in a thoughtful way. I liked how you described, 'not inclined to stay aligned.' Cheers.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015

Thank you Benjamin.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

The photograph you took to accompany your charming poem works well with your words. I enjoyed the content of your piece and the monorhymed stanzas. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015

Thank you BeasPeas,

Comment from lightink

Excellent

This is very sweet! I enjoyed the endearing content the good flow, the mono rhymes and the occasional inner rhymes! I can imagine this in a children's book!

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015

Thank you lightink.

Comment from gypsymoth

Excellent

I think you did an excellent job considering you had to stay within the restraints of this weird criteria. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsymoth

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you gypsymoth

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

A nice little poem about little geese using this unique poetry writing style. Even young children will appreciate this poem.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you Brett. Yes, i do hope so.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

hi there,

a great attempt at this unusual competition.
Something a bit different. this looks a lot like an original cyclon base ship to me from Battlestar Galactica.

Nice one. A charming and fun little poem. Let's hope the cyclons don't get them.

GMG

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you giraffmang. Yes, let's hope.