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Celebrating Golden Jubilee

5/7/5 love poem

8 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Congratulations! Nice haiku. Capture a moment in time. Followed the 5/7/5 format. Has vivid images. It can be read in one breath.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

reply by the author on 25-May-2015
    Hello friend, I thank you for your visit and the kind review, glad you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from danpald
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Four years to share the memory
Of seeking the love that could be
Not lost but wasted for a time
That is now shared for a life of good wine

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

reply by the author on 24-May-2015
    danpaid my friend, I appreciate the poetic review in your quatrain and thank you very much for the visit.
Comment from TPAC
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Fresh. The things people say poet in this work definitely makes statement which rips the heart sly tongue wraps the reader by remarks enchantments Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

reply by the author on 24-May-2015
    TPAC my friend, very kind of you to visit, glad you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from angel123
Exceptional
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This love poem displays real love. I love it and enjoyed reading it. It flows well and your artwork choice enhances it. I suggest you promote your poem. It is beautiful and it has a bit of humor to it.

Angel123

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

reply by the author on 24-May-2015
    Hello Angle, you are very kind, I am grateful for your time and the wonderful review/suggestion; thank you very much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a nice presentation. Good job on the syllable count, the choice of artwork, and the message.

My grandparents were married 64 years. They were 18 (grandfather) and 14 (grandmother). I can easily identify with your poem.

Good job and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 23-May-2015

reply by the author on 23-May-2015
    Hello jannypan, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful comments, thak you very much, God bless.
Comment from reconciled
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a wonderful poem of love...to lose any time together is a loss...and wonderful to celebrate those Golden years...love...beautiful...so nicely expressed...and very well written...Love Michael

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

reply by the author on 23-May-2015
    Hello friend, glad you stopped by and like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct line and syllable count. What a lovely story especially since the only regret was waiting until you were old enough to legally wed. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

reply by the author on 23-May-2015
    Hello Mystic Angel, I appreciate your time and the insight, thank you very much.
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
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What a lovely pun to your love story. Beautiful ode to marriage. It seems you have a very lovely marriage to the love of your life. Nicely written 5-7-5.

Kind regards
Sarah

 Comment Written 23-May-2015

reply by the author on 23-May-2015
    Hello Sarah, I thank you for your visit and the wonderful review, glad you like the write; enjoy the weekend.