Little Poems
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Comment from Pantygynt
Well you can't reverse this one. Nice piece of advice, sorry it has been a long time coming. Had to spend some time this week earning money. Annoying but essential from time to time.
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
Well you can't reverse this one. Nice piece of advice, sorry it has been a long time coming. Had to spend some time this week earning money. Annoying but essential from time to time.
Comment Written 16-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. Yes, most understandable.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Well done.
This is a perfect antonym poem too.
The carefully chosen image complements the poem perfectly.
"Calm down' in this modern era seems to often be too hard for some.
Sounds like great advice too. ******
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
Well done.
This is a perfect antonym poem too.
The carefully chosen image complements the poem perfectly.
"Calm down' in this modern era seems to often be too hard for some.
Sounds like great advice too. ******
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you Shirley. Yup, there are a lot of hot heads around.
Comment from rod007
There's a great message in this poem. I've been through this in my past. When I couldn't reason with this person and she continued to abuse and utter words of vileness and hatred, the only thing I could do was to leave. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
There's a great message in this poem. I've been through this in my past. When I couldn't reason with this person and she continued to abuse and utter words of vileness and hatred, the only thing I could do was to leave. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you rod. Yup, think most people have experienced it. Some more than others.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Another neat format that you are so good at Mr T. You are so right to go..Too bad I just never seem to get that I rather stay and argue about some nonsense till they go lol
tk
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
Another neat format that you are so good at Mr T. You are so right to go..Too bad I just never seem to get that I rather stay and argue about some nonsense till they go lol
tk
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you Sir T. Been there, done that too.
Comment from Joan E.
I figured you enjoyed this form and would create another poem with it. I admired the contrast between "Come" and "Go" plus your internal rhyme. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
I figured you enjoyed this form and would create another poem with it. I admired the contrast between "Come" and "Go" plus your internal rhyme. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you Joan. Can't do just one. You know me well.
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I know you well enough not to be surprised by your being captivated by a new form. Write on, my friend- Joan
Comment from TAB_that's me
Great antonym poem. It is written in perfect form using opposites for the first line and last line. Nicely done.
Teresa
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
Great antonym poem. It is written in perfect form using opposites for the first line and last line. Nicely done.
Teresa
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you Tesesa.