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Beautiful Death

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from birth I have longed for death

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Comment from Eric1
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Hi cbat, this is a sad and very stressful part of your young life , but for your little sister it must have been truly traumatic, to be used and abused in that way at such a tender age must have been harrowing, I am glad to read that you still love her and have forgiven her my friend.

 Comment Written 09-May-2015


reply by the author on 10-May-2015
    Thank you.
    The problem with abuse is that it effects everyone different.
    I always understood this, so was not really blaming her, but sometimes if we cannot do the right thing we distance ourselves to protect our families.
    Often after so many years the individual has to decide when to accept help.
reply by Eric1 on 11-May-2015
    I totally agree my friend
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day mate, what a life you have lead. Your stories are always fascinating and I am following them with interest.

A couple of spags....

"When he came to the class room(classroom), he was allowed to take the child to another room to tutor."

""He pied(peed) in my dinky", her description."

"The last time she asked me for help, I was separated from my husband and she wanted to move in with me with (her) eight children. "

"I was living in an others(Another's...or...another sister's house)) house and could not do this,"

Cheers Fez



 Comment Written 09-May-2015


reply by the author on 10-May-2015
    Thank you!
    I try to fix things as you point them out.
    That you take so much time to do so is appreciated.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Sounds like she has problems way beyond the help you can give her. I would turn her away in a heart beat if it was me. Living life in half-truths? Not in this life time. Action flows smoothly. Easy to follow story line. Write on.

 Comment Written 08-May-2015


reply by the author on 10-May-2015
    Thanks!
Comment from lancellot
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Compelling read.

notes:

she described the times he did[,] "I just shut my eye's and mind and went somewhere else[.]"(.)

- add, and move over


I was living in an {others house} and could not do this

- what is this?

She has gained support and [is] receiving the help she should have received as a child,
- add

 Comment Written 07-May-2015


reply by the author on 10-May-2015
    Thank you for much appreciated help.