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Remembrance Day 2015

A short story.

22 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Ine, you are so sweet...you feel for all...it is awful what so many had to go through...I will look it up on the net...but you keep us updated sweet girl...sigh on your story...very well written...love ya girl...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 09-May-2015


reply by the author on 10-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
reply by l.raven on 10-May-2015
    you are so very welcome Ine...have a wonderful week you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Glasstruth
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Those who gave their lives gave the greatest scarifice, and you can't give more than that. Remembrance Day, has it taught us any lessons? So many wars, and still don't see the light at the end of the tunnel. Interesting on how the clapper wore out due to metal fatigue. Heartfelt and beautifully written. Les

 Comment Written 09-May-2015


reply by the author on 10-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the story. I am from America. We have our days to remember the war dead and all the men who fought. I think this day must be something like that. I would like to hear more about it. Fanstory helps me learn about different countries and their customs. Great work.

 Comment Written 08-May-2015


reply by the author on 09-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Thanks for the lovey six.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Ine. Great work mate. In Australia we have ANZAC day on the 25th of April each year. It stands for Australian and New Zealand Army Corps. I am wondering where your father and grandfather were deported from and to. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 08-May-2015


reply by the author on 08-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. I don't know to where, as my father was traumatised, he never told.
Comment from Treischel
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I guess this is a holiday that celebrates the end of yhe Nazi German occupation. I admit that I'm not familiar with it, but it sounds like a serious event of commemoration.

 Comment Written 07-May-2015


reply by the author on 08-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Yes.
Comment from Bryana
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Hi Ine,

It's wonderful of you to share this with us.
The writing is short but so informative.
The war affected so many people that
there would be so many things to remember
so it wouldn't happen again.

Have a wonderful day dear friend.

 Comment Written 07-May-2015


reply by the author on 08-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend
Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi Ine,
You have written a very interesting story about the past and also the present. We must remember what our grandparents had to endure. I will look forward to reading the girls poem when you translate it.

Well written,
Mary

 Comment Written 07-May-2015


reply by the author on 07-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from Joan E.
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I think your Remembrance Day might be like our Memorial Day in May. It was fascinating to hear that the clapper fell due to metal fatigue and a young girl's poem was recognized. I look forward to your translation- Joan

 Comment Written 07-May-2015


reply by the author on 07-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from c_lucas
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It is odd that Germany committed so many atrophies and is still a respected nation. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words and good imagery.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015


reply by the author on 07-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a great last part of the week.
reply by c_lucas on 07-May-2015
    You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Ine,

This is a very interesting short story which I wish had been longer as it's the first time I've ever heard or read about Remembrance Day. I didn't even know there was such a thing.

Kat

 Comment Written 06-May-2015


reply by the author on 07-May-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a great last part of the week.
reply by MizKat on 07-May-2015
    Thanks!