Orpheus and the Argonauts
a sonnet35 total reviews
Comment from Colin John
This is an excellant contest go greek entry and yes eistein was right about tales of the past and when I see my grandchildren eyes light up every time I put them to bed when I mention a fairy, pixie etc its a great feeling. Kind regards Colin
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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This is an excellant contest go greek entry and yes eistein was right about tales of the past and when I see my grandchildren eyes light up every time I put them to bed when I mention a fairy, pixie etc its a great feeling. Kind regards Colin
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Hi Colin,
I've been away for a while due to a family wedding and summertime harvest, etc.
What a nice surprise to return and find a review of one of my older works and your wonderful comments.
Keep reading those fairy tales to your grandchildren. They are a great way to inspire wonder and creativity.
Debi
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Glad to have you back Debi and thank you for the comment, they love it and so do I . Cheers
Comment from May 1
That's such a fun poem. I love the idea and the way it is presented. That's so nice to hear. The ending is awesome. I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's great.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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That's such a fun poem. I love the idea and the way it is presented. That's so nice to hear. The ending is awesome. I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's great.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Hi May1,
So glad you liked it. Thank you for the kind words of encouragement.
Debi
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This tells the story of Orpheus and the Argonauts in perfect sonnet form. The rhyme, meter and flow are all well done, and the notes are informative and well written. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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This tells the story of Orpheus and the Argonauts in perfect sonnet form. The rhyme, meter and flow are all well done, and the notes are informative and well written. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Spitfire
What a skillfully done sonnet not easy to do especially when telling a story rather than create a mood. I'm guessing you thought of the idea in the couplet, then found the story to prove it. Wonderful use of assonance and alliteration throughout.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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What a skillfully done sonnet not easy to do especially when telling a story rather than create a mood. I'm guessing you thought of the idea in the couplet, then found the story to prove it. Wonderful use of assonance and alliteration throughout.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the generous comments about the writing, and especially for the wonderful six stars!!
Actually, I picked the subject and wrote the three quatrains. Then I got stuck. I did not know what to do for the couplet. I actually took a few days coming up with all sorts of different endings before I finally got to this one.
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Boy, did I get that wrong. :-)
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Ah, but you are perceptive. I often write the ending first and then ask myself, now how did that happen? So for my typical style it was a bit unnerving not knowing how to end it.
Comment from jmdg1954
You brought back some childhood memories. Two of my favorite movies as a kid were, "The Dirty Dozen", and "Jason and the Argonauts"! And here you are putting the story into a poem.
Nicely done. John
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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You brought back some childhood memories. Two of my favorite movies as a kid were, "The Dirty Dozen", and "Jason and the Argonauts"! And here you are putting the story into a poem.
Nicely done. John
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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I too loved Jason and the Argonuats. I think our local station must have owned it because it seemed to be on quite often. I am pleased to hear it brought back some good childhood memories. Thank you for the encoruagement, John!
Comment from artemis53
Well done in presentation and your author notes into a look at Greek mythology. I'm sure that many appreciated your in depth explanation behind your poetry.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Well done in presentation and your author notes into a look at Greek mythology. I'm sure that many appreciated your in depth explanation behind your poetry.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate you taking time to read and comment.
Comment from valerieellis
Excellent!! I love the way you told the story through rhyme. The imagery was vivid and the rhythm made the words flow smoothly. It was very easy to follow and understand. I also enjoyed the way you italicized the siren's song...very creative and it caused me to sing the words :) I look forward to reading more of your writings. God bless :)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Excellent!! I love the way you told the story through rhyme. The imagery was vivid and the rhythm made the words flow smoothly. It was very easy to follow and understand. I also enjoyed the way you italicized the siren's song...very creative and it caused me to sing the words :) I look forward to reading more of your writings. God bless :)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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I am thrilled that you wanted to sing the Siren song. They makes me smile. I appreciate the kind comments about the writing. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Nosha17
I love Greek Mythology and you have incorporated the story of Jason and Orpheus so well within the poem. Excellent rhyming and imagery, great Mythology content and excellent illustration. Most enjoyable and good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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I love Greek Mythology and you have incorporated the story of Jason and Orpheus so well within the poem. Excellent rhyming and imagery, great Mythology content and excellent illustration. Most enjoyable and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the most generous stars, Faye! I am so pleased to hear you enjoyed reading it, and are also a Greek mythology lover. I love those old tales. They have so much drama and action. Thank you for the good luck wishes and encouragement. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Debi
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Dedi,
This is a wonderful rendition of that classic tale. You do a good job of putting their voyage to rhyme in this beautiful sonnet.
This was always one of my favorite stories from Greek mythology and I appreciate your portrayal with this solid entry.
My best for its success!
Take care, Bill
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Hi Dedi,
This is a wonderful rendition of that classic tale. You do a good job of putting their voyage to rhyme in this beautiful sonnet.
This was always one of my favorite stories from Greek mythology and I appreciate your portrayal with this solid entry.
My best for its success!
Take care, Bill
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Hi Bill,
I guess it obvious that I too liked Jason and the Argonauts. I loved it when the movie would come of tv for those old Saturday kiddie matinees they used to show. Thank for the well wishes. I am so happy you enjoyed it. Debi
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Debi...
Great story for the prompt -- well written.
Love your artwork and formatting -- it's a super presentation and entry.
Enjoyed your notes as well. They add to the overall work.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Hi, Debi...
Great story for the prompt -- well written.
Love your artwork and formatting -- it's a super presentation and entry.
Enjoyed your notes as well. They add to the overall work.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Jax. I appreciate the encouraging remarks about the writing, and for the good luck wishes, too. Debi
