Little Poems
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Comment from rod007
I like this Palindrome poem and the humor of the saintly dog with God as his master. I wonder where God takes his pet for a walk. I would say it would be a jaunt in the clouds = the local park!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
I like this Palindrome poem and the humor of the saintly dog with God as his master. I wonder where God takes his pet for a walk. I would say it would be a jaunt in the clouds = the local park!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you Rod. Hopefully he picks up the poop.
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your clever re-working of the picture and your name selection. You always make creating Palindromes easy, and they are not! Yes, any food could be deified in heaven, but with "deified birdrib," I had visions of a cross... Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
I liked your clever re-working of the picture and your name selection. You always make creating Palindromes easy, and they are not! Yes, any food could be deified in heaven, but with "deified birdrib," I had visions of a cross... Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Thank you Joan. Could be. I had visions of him choking.
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Ouch--maybe the bones were soft like those of sardines! -J
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
You are funny Think your mind might be almost as warped as mine Mr T To think they used to call me crazy now I'm so old they say I'm eccentric hehehe One of the benefits of being way on the plus side of 60...You can get away with a lot more things Why? Cause your not crazy anymore..
tk
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
You are funny Think your mind might be almost as warped as mine Mr T To think they used to call me crazy now I'm so old they say I'm eccentric hehehe One of the benefits of being way on the plus side of 60...You can get away with a lot more things Why? Cause your not crazy anymore..
tk
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thank You Sir T. I right there with you.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Some serious thought must have gone on here. Lol.
I've just written a Sestina but can't get my head around reversible verse. Lol.
Who knows where our muse may take us.
An interesting poem which poses a challenge which you have met quite readily.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
Some serious thought must have gone on here. Lol.
I've just written a Sestina but can't get my head around reversible verse. Lol.
Who knows where our muse may take us.
An interesting poem which poses a challenge which you have met quite readily.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thank you Shirley. I wrote a more serious one today too.
Comment from Pantygynt
Is this what is meant by "manna from heaven"? What else can I say? I have to say something or it won't let me go. This is an excellent and inventive palindrome. Let's hope for his sake that the rib is not too spare.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
Is this what is meant by "manna from heaven"? What else can I say? I have to say something or it won't let me go. This is an excellent and inventive palindrome. Let's hope for his sake that the rib is not too spare.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Thank You Pantygynt. Good point. Orget caught in his throat.
Comment from patcelaw
I do think you have been busy with the Palindromes. They are fun to read and fun to try and you do a good job with them. Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
I do think you have been busy with the Palindromes. They are fun to read and fun to try and you do a good job with them. Patricia
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Thank you Patricia. I'm running out of them soon.