Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 214 "Cease for a Day"Small and Specialty Poems
15 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Cease for a day, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed poem. Very nice rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, Lakeport.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Cease for a day, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed poem. Very nice rhyming and flow, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you, Lakeport.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you Les.
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you are very welcome.Lakeport.
Comment from patcelaw
I do like this very much as it is like a song and I can almost hear a guitar player singing it softly at the window of a lover. Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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I do like this very much as it is like a song and I can almost hear a guitar player singing it softly at the window of a lover. Patricia
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you Patricia. That is a sweet thought.
Comment from rod007
There is a quiet and calm passion in this morning poem. Yeah, going to work during the day while your loved spouse is at home must be hard. I suppose night shift workers would resort to a serenade when the moon lights the darkness. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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There is a quiet and calm passion in this morning poem. Yeah, going to work during the day while your loved spouse is at home must be hard. I suppose night shift workers would resort to a serenade when the moon lights the darkness. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2015
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Thank you rod. I think you're right.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, strong, creative and thought provoking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and the background color brings out the beauty of this picture.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, strong, creative and thought provoking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and the background color brings out the beauty of this picture.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you harmony for a wonderful review.
Comment from adewpearl
great explanation of the Aubade
solid use of rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment
I like the internal proximate rhyme of seek streets
very effective personification of the sun
strong emotional appeal throughout
Brooke
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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great explanation of the Aubade
solid use of rhyming couplets
good use of enjambment
I like the internal proximate rhyme of seek streets
very effective personification of the sun
strong emotional appeal throughout
Brooke
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you Brooke. You maje me smile.
Comment from robina1978
Beautiful photo that complements your poem perfectly. I forgot what an Aubade was. I liked it a lot: a description of parting your love and warm sheets You have to go to work. Maybe I will try this form sometime.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Beautiful photo that complements your poem perfectly. I forgot what an Aubade was. I liked it a lot: a description of parting your love and warm sheets You have to go to work. Maybe I will try this form sometime.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you Ine. By all means, give it a try sometimes.
Comment from Nosha17
I think most people would prefer to stay in a warm bed, rather than have to go off to work. Good use of imagery and rhyming to convey your thoughts of regret. The word for dawn in French is aube-must be the origins of this poetic form. Lovely photo. Faye
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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I think most people would prefer to stay in a warm bed, rather than have to go off to work. Good use of imagery and rhyming to convey your thoughts of regret. The word for dawn in French is aube-must be the origins of this poetic form. Lovely photo. Faye
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you Nosha. Yes, i am sure it is.
Comment from sunnilicious
And every good night comes to an end. I enjoyed your poem. It was romantic yet still bittersweet about the morning light. Great visual imagery created. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Enjoyable to read. Goodnight.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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And every good night comes to an end. I enjoyed your poem. It was romantic yet still bittersweet about the morning light. Great visual imagery created. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Enjoyable to read. Goodnight.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you Alicia. Every good morning should have a good night. This one has 6 wonderful stars.
Comment from bayforesthimankush
It is a wonderful poem. A few hours ago I have written Haiku poem (5-7-5) on nature; the title is morning and theme is that I get up in the morning to see the rising sun to fresh me up for the day. This poem has touched my mind. Our village house was at west bank of a pond and I remember vividly the beautiful rising morning sun.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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It is a wonderful poem. A few hours ago I have written Haiku poem (5-7-5) on nature; the title is morning and theme is that I get up in the morning to see the rising sun to fresh me up for the day. This poem has touched my mind. Our village house was at west bank of a pond and I remember vividly the beautiful rising morning sun.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you bayforesthimankush. It is wonderful to recall that.
Comment from fastdigits
Whatever form of poetry you call this
beautiful poem of love matters not, as
each whispered words floats down the
screen in unerring warm thoughts of
a lover's call.
Well done
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Whatever form of poetry you call this
beautiful poem of love matters not, as
each whispered words floats down the
screen in unerring warm thoughts of
a lover's call.
Well done
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you fastdigits. You review read like a poem itself.
