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Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, ha. I know I shouldn't laugh on account of because this is a horror story, but I would have to agree with the author, Constance is biodegradable.
Excellent horror and thriller story and written in exactly 100 words. You're really good at these, Bill.
Top of the season to you my dear. Looking forward to your next year's output.
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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Ha, ha. I know I shouldn't laugh on account of because this is a horror story, but I would have to agree with the author, Constance is biodegradable.
Excellent horror and thriller story and written in exactly 100 words. You're really good at these, Bill.
Top of the season to you my dear. Looking forward to your next year's output.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Gloria, for seeking this out and sending it into the All-time best zone. Bill
Comment from emkoutny
Love this! I used my last six star on it! Do you know what on what day we are rewarded more? I tired doing this and was stumped for an idea. I love the irony in it of the grocery bags being the tool of her demise as well as the line about being biodegradable.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Love this! I used my last six star on it! Do you know what on what day we are rewarded more? I tired doing this and was stumped for an idea. I love the irony in it of the grocery bags being the tool of her demise as well as the line about being biodegradable.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you, em, for the fantastic review. Bill
Comment from tfawcus
The constant nagging of a good woman can drive a man to all sorts of things! In this case, Ned seems to have found the perfect solution. Just about as macabre as you can get within the scope of 100 words! The biodegradable comment at the end is a great finishing touch!
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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The constant nagging of a good woman can drive a man to all sorts of things! In this case, Ned seems to have found the perfect solution. Just about as macabre as you can get within the scope of 100 words! The biodegradable comment at the end is a great finishing touch!
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you, Tony, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Zue65
Wow, the twist is a surprise and unexpected in the last closing line of your story. After all, this is a story of the plastic and it must therefore be told from the point of view of the plastic himself or herself. I enjoyed this very short story.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2015
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Wow, the twist is a surprise and unexpected in the last closing line of your story. After all, this is a story of the plastic and it must therefore be told from the point of view of the plastic himself or herself. I enjoyed this very short story.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Nassus, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Bill,
It isn't easy writing a story with just one hundred words, but I think you did a good job. I loved the satirical ending.
You just need to go back and double space between paragraphs.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2015
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Hi Bill,
It isn't easy writing a story with just one hundred words, but I think you did a good job. I loved the satirical ending.
You just need to go back and double space between paragraphs.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 13-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Lou, for looking at this. I will separate to improve its readability. Thanks again.
Comment from Debbie Noland
Well, that Ned is pretty cold! Your little flash horror story works pretty well, employing a clever twist on the couple's argument over plastic bag biodegradability. It is one of those stories where the premise is almost too funny (am I sick?) to convey authentic horror, but I still like its wit and originality.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Well, that Ned is pretty cold! Your little flash horror story works pretty well, employing a clever twist on the couple's argument over plastic bag biodegradability. It is one of those stories where the premise is almost too funny (am I sick?) to convey authentic horror, but I still like its wit and originality.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Debbie, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from acerisestory
Hi Bill -- Your story is well written with a shocking end. Yikes!
I love the twist -- with the plastic bags.
This is a great entry for the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Hi Bill -- Your story is well written with a shocking end. Yikes!
I love the twist -- with the plastic bags.
This is a great entry for the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Thank you for giving this a look. Bill
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You are welcome! Alana
Comment from Dawn Munro
Eeeee-eeeks. I guess Constance wasn't too quick to learn not to criticize, hmmm? What a great little horror story! All the elements are there - not an easy task in only one hundred words, but this is very clever - great plot, Good luck! :)
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Eeeee-eeeks. I guess Constance wasn't too quick to learn not to criticize, hmmm? What a great little horror story! All the elements are there - not an easy task in only one hundred words, but this is very clever - great plot, Good luck! :)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Dawn, for giving this a look. Bill
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Doc Holiday
Well-written contest entry! It is a terrific little horror story that you have created here with a twist of being environmentally friendly. Good luck in the contest!
Cleverly done, Bill!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Well-written contest entry! It is a terrific little horror story that you have created here with a twist of being environmentally friendly. Good luck in the contest!
Cleverly done, Bill!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Doc, for giving this a look.
Comment from jlsavell
Bill Schott, okay that was a horror story, short but epic in proportions and imagery.
I am impressed. It is hard to do a potent story in 100 words or less. You must have to do a lot of editing.. well done.. jlsavell
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Bill Schott, okay that was a horror story, short but epic in proportions and imagery.
I am impressed. It is hard to do a potent story in 100 words or less. You must have to do a lot of editing.. well done.. jlsavell
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Jimi, for the kind review. I did this story on my IPad so I had to count each word manually. I got up to sixty-five words and then had to add and subtract ideas for a conclusion up to 100.
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wow, keep up the good work..
