The Wonder
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Comment from TPAC
Sweet Nicely expression with great beat definite poetic in structuring with proper ingredients erratic in placement a true talent and a inspiring work Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Sweet Nicely expression with great beat definite poetic in structuring with proper ingredients erratic in placement a true talent and a inspiring work Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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thank you so much....love Michael
Comment from RGstar
This is beautiful my friend. I wish I knew the entity directed at, yet formidable in a poetic sense, and that is what we look for. I have been away so missed a lot of poems. Good to see you here again in the competition. By the way, love enya.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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This is beautiful my friend. I wish I knew the entity directed at, yet formidable in a poetic sense, and that is what we look for. I have been away so missed a lot of poems. Good to see you here again in the competition. By the way, love enya.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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smile.....I won. thanks Shakespeare....my friend and one I learn from. bless you Bro....love Bug-
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you got it, my brother.
Comment from emkoutny
I like the religious symbolism used in this poem-it reminded me of "Romeo and Juliet," in that respect. I was a bit confused as to the relationship between the speaker and the person or entity to whom they are speaking.
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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I like the religious symbolism used in this poem-it reminded me of "Romeo and Juliet," in that respect. I was a bit confused as to the relationship between the speaker and the person or entity to whom they are speaking.
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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well we each own our own lives and experiences.....you'd of had to been there....-wink- thanks man love bug-
Comment from danpald
The time to hear the whispers
In the dawn of evening time
Then to hold the memory
Of love that twinkles bright
When alone the heart hears
Longs for the words to sound
Upon the waves of the breeze
Along the distance bound
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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The time to hear the whispers
In the dawn of evening time
Then to hold the memory
Of love that twinkles bright
When alone the heart hears
Longs for the words to sound
Upon the waves of the breeze
Along the distance bound
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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you bet....if only. we had the guts to scream!.....our dreams real.....love bug-
Comment from pipersfancy
For me - this felt wistfully sad... lonely, although, as if the speaker does not realize/accept that alone-ness. The juxtaposition of the whispers that keep a name alive, along with the impossibility of the loved one dying... I don't know, perhaps it's the steady drum of the wind and rain outside my window today, but this left me feeling empty and melancholic... despite it being such a lyrical and beautiful work!
All my best for this wonderful piece in the POM contest, Michael!
Christina
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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For me - this felt wistfully sad... lonely, although, as if the speaker does not realize/accept that alone-ness. The juxtaposition of the whispers that keep a name alive, along with the impossibility of the loved one dying... I don't know, perhaps it's the steady drum of the wind and rain outside my window today, but this left me feeling empty and melancholic... despite it being such a lyrical and beautiful work!
All my best for this wonderful piece in the POM contest, Michael!
Christina
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Yes.....it is sad,when what should be.....is not.thank you sweet lady you are a poet and desreve to be recocognized as such.....plus that voice....smile.....love michael
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I thank you, kind sir, for the sweet compliment!
Christina
Comment from Tatarka2
I thought this was beautiful, and creepy, and so well-written. Congratulations on being nominated for Poem of the Month. I can't think of a single thing I could suggest you change. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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I thought this was beautiful, and creepy, and so well-written. Congratulations on being nominated for Poem of the Month. I can't think of a single thing I could suggest you change. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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its not about luck sweetheart....or even talent. whats it all about I'm afraid only Alphie knows....-wink-....love Bug-
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So true . . .(sigh) . .
Comment from MissMerri
This is a mood poem... so brilliantly portraying the mood with musically sounding lyrical lines that flow easily and offer enough rhymes... but not too many. Just a beautiful thing, this poem-song. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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This is a mood poem... so brilliantly portraying the mood with musically sounding lyrical lines that flow easily and offer enough rhymes... but not too many. Just a beautiful thing, this poem-song. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Sorry Mary....running a bit late....still very much appreciative you stopped by and enjoyed......love michael
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Michael,
does that visual set up the magic that followed?
Hell yeah!... or should that be Heaven yeah? Hmmmmmmmmm...
No matter, you get my drift?
I truly loved the sentiment of this magical-lyrically penned journey of something most of us would be questioning... I know I have been... but the question is always answered in stereo... internal conversations with my higher power never leaves me lonely or thinking of a demise... energy can only congregate at its source.
Loved this poem my deep thinking brother... the depth transcends an earthly realm.
With our thoughts we create,
a swaddled love,
James.
******Stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Hi Michael,
does that visual set up the magic that followed?
Hell yeah!... or should that be Heaven yeah? Hmmmmmmmmm...
No matter, you get my drift?
I truly loved the sentiment of this magical-lyrically penned journey of something most of us would be questioning... I know I have been... but the question is always answered in stereo... internal conversations with my higher power never leaves me lonely or thinking of a demise... energy can only congregate at its source.
Loved this poem my deep thinking brother... the depth transcends an earthly realm.
With our thoughts we create,
a swaddled love,
James.
******Stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Hey james....smile ...what's up bro....ah hell if I know just wing it with the rest of the birds...haha thanks man....love bug
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There's no wingin' it you humble dude... your mind soars and captures all in its sight... than delivers the reaction of an ever-inquiring heart into the uniqueness that your mind interprets... yeah, I am a big fan!
Be well Brother...
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man...you make it sound like it should....encore!...more more!...haha...-smile-
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. It is a free verse, with mainly alliteration. I loved the combination of romance and religious. I don't think you often do this.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. It is a free verse, with mainly alliteration. I loved the combination of romance and religious. I don't think you often do this.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Hi ha sister....smile....um....religion ,yea I'm not real fond of what most would consider their religion ....nor do I think God is.....God and his example Jesus's life.....are part of me....so I suppose a lil of that's in everything I write. Right?.......smile anyway thank you dear.....love bug
Comment from MoonMuse
Hey Michael - this one is begging to be sung. Lyrical verses from start to end. "do you spin in sounds spell-bound..." - you have me spell-bound indeed. Beautiful job as always... Cheers, MM
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Hey Michael - this one is begging to be sung. Lyrical verses from start to end. "do you spin in sounds spell-bound..." - you have me spell-bound indeed. Beautiful job as always... Cheers, MM
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Hey LT.....ah yes...I agree wholeheartedly ....-smile- ah well dont hyperventalate whatever you do...lol...thank you sir....love Bug-
