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Comment from Pantygynt
And then there are the near rhymes: the a,f and d lines all being close relatives as well as the c and e lines. It all hangs together like struggling with the jigsaw - all those pieces that so nearly fit, that ought to fit but... A nice match of form and content.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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And then there are the near rhymes: the a,f and d lines all being close relatives as well as the c and e lines. It all hangs together like struggling with the jigsaw - all those pieces that so nearly fit, that ought to fit but... A nice match of form and content.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Thank you very much Pantygynt. Once again we connect well.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for continuing to experiment with this intriguing form. I enjoyed your rhyme scheme, but it's hard to believe that you like puzzles more than poetry--than again your poetry is often akin to a puzzle! In any event, your photograph captures the extent of your hobby. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you for continuing to experiment with this intriguing form. I enjoyed your rhyme scheme, but it's hard to believe that you like puzzles more than poetry--than again your poetry is often akin to a puzzle! In any event, your photograph captures the extent of your hobby. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you Joan. Poetry is a passion. Puzzles an obsession.
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Ah, yes, I understand the distinction. Smiles- Joan
Comment from L. Sherman
The image is very fitting to the poem somehow. I can't quite put my finger on it, but the complete piece, poem and picture altogether, really works for me. And again, I do appreciate the nice quick read.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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The image is very fitting to the poem somehow. I can't quite put my finger on it, but the complete piece, poem and picture altogether, really works for me. And again, I do appreciate the nice quick read.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you Lisa. I am glad it works for you.
Comment from ravenblack
Yes. Certain obsessions are not exactly conducive to good relations, especially when they overwhelm the dining room table. I was not initially sold on this form, but you are making me a believer.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Yes. Certain obsessions are not exactly conducive to good relations, especially when they overwhelm the dining room table. I was not initially sold on this form, but you are making me a believer.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you ravenblack. That's much better than boring you to death.
Comment from rod007
I cannot do these puzzles for the life of me. Your innate ability at analyzing and achieving a complete picture is truly amazing. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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I cannot do these puzzles for the life of me. Your innate ability at analyzing and achieving a complete picture is truly amazing. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you rod. It takes infinite patience.
Comment from TAB_that's me
I do like this poem - not especially my favorite form but it works well in this one. I like the rhymes you used and the rhyme scheme.
Teresa
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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I do like this poem - not especially my favorite form but it works well in this one. I like the rhymes you used and the rhyme scheme.
Teresa
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Thank you Teresa.
