Little Poems
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Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your research on sonnets. Your Word Sonnet certainly is pithy and compactly resonant. I enjoyed your self-portrait too! I admired your rhymes and description of thoughts of love being "complete". Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
Thank you for sharing your research on sonnets. Your Word Sonnet certainly is pithy and compactly resonant. I enjoyed your self-portrait too! I admired your rhymes and description of thoughts of love being "complete". Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Thank you Joan. I' ll sleep well.
Comment from flamingstar
How intriguing. I'm not sure what you had in mind as you put it together, but to me it suggests that blissful moment when the soul detaches from its shell at the point of physical death, rises above all the earthly drama and bids the rest of us a fond and loving farewell before returning to Heaven complete.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
How intriguing. I'm not sure what you had in mind as you put it together, but to me it suggests that blissful moment when the soul detaches from its shell at the point of physical death, rises above all the earthly drama and bids the rest of us a fond and loving farewell before returning to Heaven complete.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Thank you flaming star, that!s an excellent interpretation.
Comment from Pyrrho
I have no idea why anyone would call this a sonnet but the form is one of the few that is somewhat appealing and you do a fine job with it.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
I have no idea why anyone would call this a sonnet but the form is one of the few that is somewhat appealing and you do a fine job with it.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Thank you Pyrrho.
Comment from patcelaw
Interesting format. I am not a big fan of sonnets, but this one I can enjoy, for it is simple. I shall have to remember it and try it at a later time. patricia
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
Interesting format. I am not a big fan of sonnets, but this one I can enjoy, for it is simple. I shall have to remember it and try it at a later time. patricia
Comment Written 18-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Thank you Patricia. Yes, please do. Im sure you do well.