Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

story review
Nice job!
-action flows smoothly
-descriptive language used
-excellent format and picture
-excellent character development
-held my interest all the way to the end

Write on!

 Comment Written 11-May-2015

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reply by the author on 11-May-2015

Your review is so kind.
This one is still raw so not too easy.
Thank you.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Coral. How sad. Some poor buggers just do it tough don't they? You did a very good job in helping him and you should be proud. One little spag...

"not because I did not want to but due to other influence(s)."

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thank's.

Comment from vapros

Excellent

This sad tale of disfunctional people was surely difficult to write, even in this disjointed manner. One must bemoan the fates of them all, at this late time. Good work.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Thank you for your review.

You understand I do not consider gay as disfunctional?.

The drug trap is just another thing that plagues our loved ones.
Religion is also something that can change to cult at the drop of a hat.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

In notes "see" should be "sees". Nice tribute. Sure he would appreciate it very much. Obviously hard to write, but well done.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Thank you!