Beautiful Death
Viewing comments for Chapter 10020 "Skunk Chowder"from birth I have longed for death
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Comment from Debbie Noland
It would take a special kind of mom to remain calm with a skunk in her kitchen, not to mention waking up her children to watch it share their tuna chowder. What a wonderful recounting of a special childhood memory.
Good use of dialogue to further your narration in and interesting and suspenseful way. I enjoyed your story very much. Good luck as you continue to polish and edit.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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It would take a special kind of mom to remain calm with a skunk in her kitchen, not to mention waking up her children to watch it share their tuna chowder. What a wonderful recounting of a special childhood memory.
Good use of dialogue to further your narration in and interesting and suspenseful way. I enjoyed your story very much. Good luck as you continue to polish and edit.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you!
Comment from Janet7053
Life's simple pleasures are the best! I believe those are song lyrics. Good idea mother had to let the skunk lead them to his entryway. Very Cute!
"...jumped up onto the cupboard circling the pan" is a line that brings it to life for me because I have seen a mouse circling a pan just like that.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Life's simple pleasures are the best! I believe those are song lyrics. Good idea mother had to let the skunk lead them to his entryway. Very Cute!
"...jumped up onto the cupboard circling the pan" is a line that brings it to life for me because I have seen a mouse circling a pan just like that.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you
Comment from patcelaw
I live where we have a lot of skunks in the summer. Many times in the night I wake up to that awful smell almost to the point of gagging. I would not want one in the house. Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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I live where we have a lot of skunks in the summer. Many times in the night I wake up to that awful smell almost to the point of gagging. I would not want one in the house. Patricia
Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you for reading my story.
