Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Keep Your Eyes On Calvary"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
30 total reviews
Comment from artemis53
Quite well done. I did have a hint of a few stumbles along the way but was easily righted by the refrain. Great country take on Salvation.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Quite well done. I did have a hint of a few stumbles along the way but was easily righted by the refrain. Great country take on Salvation.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support as always.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
This a very well written poem, intended as is obvious to encourage readers to trust the Lord. Nothing could better. Whoever we are we need God. The writing itself is simple ,straightforward, and full of gems.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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This a very well written poem, intended as is obvious to encourage readers to trust the Lord. Nothing could better. Whoever we are we need God. The writing itself is simple ,straightforward, and full of gems.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support.
Comment from MelB
Lovely artwork by my friend Loyd! This is beautifully written. I love the repeat of so cast your vote for Jesus, keep your eyes on Calvary. Truth in every line. He does still loves us, no matter what. You will find rest by looking upward. Very uplifting read. Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Lovely artwork by my friend Loyd! This is beautifully written. I love the repeat of so cast your vote for Jesus, keep your eyes on Calvary. Truth in every line. He does still loves us, no matter what. You will find rest by looking upward. Very uplifting read. Great job!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I thought it fit my lyrics very well so I used it. Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Gloria ....
Another terrific song lyric by you, Brett. You've nicely stated your faith in good form and imagery.
Very nicely written.
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Another terrific song lyric by you, Brett. You've nicely stated your faith in good form and imagery.
Very nicely written.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and continued support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from misscookie
Amen!
What can I say. I tell you should try and cut a CD or what ever they call it now.
I was going say cut a record but that long played Out.
I wrote on Easter song and another I used some ones music be my own word.
Which if I was to put it out someone will make the music....
for the life of me I can't remember the words.
Thank you for sharing that uplifting poem.
Cookie
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Amen!
What can I say. I tell you should try and cut a CD or what ever they call it now.
I was going say cut a record but that long played Out.
I wrote on Easter song and another I used some ones music be my own word.
Which if I was to put it out someone will make the music....
for the life of me I can't remember the words.
Thank you for sharing that uplifting poem.
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thank you Miss Cookie. Always a pleasure hearing from you. You are so supportive of this old Country boy and his little ole lyrics. I really do appreciate your friendship and continued support. Mean a whole lot to me.
Comment from dmt1967
This is another good song. I liked the repeated lines. 'So, cast your vote foe Jesus. Keep your eye on cavalry.' I thought the picture fitted very well with the song as well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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This is another good song. I liked the repeated lines. 'So, cast your vote foe Jesus. Keep your eye on cavalry.' I thought the picture fitted very well with the song as well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and continued support. Appreciate them very much indeed.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brett - this is a really good faith poem and it is interesting where the idea comes from. Reading your author notes it is a phrase you put on the reviews you write. This is in good abcb rhyme, consistent throughout the poem. A good read and lyrics that would sound very good when sung. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Hi Brett - this is a really good faith poem and it is interesting where the idea comes from. Reading your author notes it is a phrase you put on the reviews you write. This is in good abcb rhyme, consistent throughout the poem. A good read and lyrics that would sound very good when sung. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and continued support. Always appreciate them very much.
Comment from c_lucas
Jesus will keep all of His promises. He will be with you as you travels life's pathways. This is very well written and gives anyone who seek it, a new lease on life.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Jesus will keep all of His promises. He will be with you as you travels life's pathways. This is very well written and gives anyone who seek it, a new lease on life.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Certainly agree and appreciate what you said.
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You're welcome, Brett. Charlie
Comment from meggie13
I love the lyrics and the theme used for it. There is nothing more important in life than to keep our eyes on Calvary and follow Jesus. He died for us a horrible death nailed to a cross, for our sins to be forgiven and enjoyment of eternal life. He does not care if your sins a big or small when he knocks answer and He will lift you from the guilt. What a friend we have in Jesus! Well written with a powerful picture to enhance your poem. Virtual stars******
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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I love the lyrics and the theme used for it. There is nothing more important in life than to keep our eyes on Calvary and follow Jesus. He died for us a horrible death nailed to a cross, for our sins to be forgiven and enjoyment of eternal life. He does not care if your sins a big or small when he knocks answer and He will lift you from the guilt. What a friend we have in Jesus! Well written with a powerful picture to enhance your poem. Virtual stars******
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Certainly agree. Appreciate your comments.
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You are very welcome.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from marylou4
Your poetry is alive with truth and expressed so deeply with love.
Every line of your stanzas was a praise honoring God and his son Jesus. The repetition of your phrases emphasized the unequivocal importance and reality of your words.
The euphony of your poetic style and pattern was enhanced by the consonance in carefully chosen lines.
The vivid imagery of your words touched my heart. The similes you used effectively brought home your message.
I did not find any technical flaws in this exquisite poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Your poetry is alive with truth and expressed so deeply with love.
Every line of your stanzas was a praise honoring God and his son Jesus. The repetition of your phrases emphasized the unequivocal importance and reality of your words.
The euphony of your poetic style and pattern was enhanced by the consonance in carefully chosen lines.
The vivid imagery of your words touched my heart. The similes you used effectively brought home your message.
I did not find any technical flaws in this exquisite poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and support. Appreciate them very much. Always, all we have to do is "keep your eyes on Calvary" and the rest of life just takes care of itself.
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You have been given a wonderful gift, thank you for sharing it with us.
