Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Matt Connors and the HeeBee JeeBees"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
2 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
the intricate nuances of baseball elude me and I don't know a thing about third basemen and bottom of the whatever, so this section left me a bit cold. I am not American and we don't really play or follow it over here.
I think the concept feels a bit odd to be honest with the possibility of investing in a work with no direction and no clear plot.
Good luck with it though.
GMG
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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Hi there,
the intricate nuances of baseball elude me and I don't know a thing about third basemen and bottom of the whatever, so this section left me a bit cold. I am not American and we don't really play or follow it over here.
I think the concept feels a bit odd to be honest with the possibility of investing in a work with no direction and no clear plot.
Good luck with it though.
GMG
Comment Written 02-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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Everything works out in due course. Follow along. You will definitely learn something.
Comment from Debbie Noland
So far, so good for our hero. Good description in this narrative. I will be anxious to see how Matt interacts with other characters and how you choose to reveal his character using dialogue.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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So far, so good for our hero. Good description in this narrative. I will be anxious to see how Matt interacts with other characters and how you choose to reveal his character using dialogue.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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Thank you and stay tuned!
