Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

a compelling rhyming couplet that asks a most thought-provoking question - I love the way it sounds out loud and its great use of economy of words to make a strong point and then shut up. LOL :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thank you Brooke.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Wow, another new form--you are so creative! I relished your "wondering" and enjoyed the concise poem and its pattern, plus its rhyme. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thank you Joan.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Today's beginning is yesterday's ending. It is an unending circle without separation
Perfect syllable count f or the form
Thank you for your notes

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thank you Erica.

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

that, my friend, is a really good question that has set my mind spinning. time is a concept and it is not linear, though that is how we would like to see it. I guess to answer the question, just ask ouroboros...and he won't answer with his tail in his mouth.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thank you Revenblack. I believe that's true.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

This is an interesting structure with wonderful economy of words. I was wondering what was it yesterday as I don't know whether I have the ability to see the 'cosmic circle' first hand. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thank you rod, need to meditate for that.

Comment from mshirachot

Excellent

Well now! This would not be as easy as it seems. I must print this out and ponder how I might write one of these!

The first thing I thought of after reading it was "Which comes first, the chicken or the egg? LOL

Blessings,
Marsha

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015

Thank you Marsha. Lol.

Comment from donaldcolson

Excellent

Interesting two line poem elaborating on time and process. If the first word was one instead of on might that be an improvement? don

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015

Thank you Don, good thought. I tried it but decised that would make it a statement rather than a query.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I know right? ...I was looking at the sunset and said to my husband...wouldn't it be grand to drive into the sunset and see where we would end up...I hadn't realized we were circling the city...

God bless

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015

Hah! That a good one Kiwijenny. I am delighted with your review.