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Comment from Jackarrie
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A minute poem is an interesting format for the deadly sins.

It allows with few words to be able to get to the point.

The display with all the colors is done really well. I read it before but never got back to review it.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
    Thank you, Jackarrie. So many interesting thoughts on the 7 deadlies. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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This Deadly Sins writing prompt entry is a very good one. You have taken an inaction, "Sloth", and highlighted it's POWER. What is so senseless to most conscientious people has become a way of life that promotes joy to the calloused. Thanks for Sharing. May God Bless You.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you, Dr. Nad. I appreciate your "getting" my piece.
reply by Dr. Nad on 24-Jan-2015
    You are very welcome,
    Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from Charlene0513
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If a person feels unworthy and feels he is not needed to partake in anything that is serving or giving unto others in society they become a recluse and act as if nothing matters anymore; all the while they are heart-broken inside.
Charlene

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Hi Charlene. Thank you for your interesting review. I think those who may feel as you suggest above are depressives, whether temporarily due to situational circumstances or chronically. In either case medication under the supervision of a physician would be warranted. My heart goes out to those people. But I think the 7 deadly sins point out true character flaws rather than illness.
Comment from Tatarka2
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I really liked this. I thought you said some very important things, very simply, using few words. This, I think, makes this poem very effective. The fact that it is a Minute poem is even more impressive.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you, Tatarka. I like to write poetry that is (hopefully) clear and fairly short. I strive to construct poems that my readers can understand without having a PhD degree. Those are the types of things I like to read also. I appreciate your review because you are right on target with the clarity POV.
Comment from K. Lorraine
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So simply put and easily understood. This was an excellent use of so few words for this challenging contest prompt. Very well done and a definite contender. Thank you for sharing your poetic talents... good luck

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you, K. Lorraine. I appreciate your review. Yes, short and easily understood is the name of the game for me.
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
I enjoyed your take on the prompt.
I like how you used the minute poem to comment upon all of the deadly sins but using the last stanza to conclude with sloth. Good adherence to form requirements.
I also enjoyed the creative presentation of your poem.
Good luck in the voting booth!
Kindest regards, Debra

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you, Debra, for your kind review and comments on my poem.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

You present this creatively. Direct message, and interpretation of the prompt. Well done.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Hi Jax. Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from mbagby23
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What an excellent way to tell about the seven deadly sins. Short and easy to understand. Children could understand this easy.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you, mbagby. Your review is helpful and appreciated. Yes, I like short and easy poetry.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Anon. That is a very, very well thought out piece of poetry mate. The presentation is perfect and it is a brilliant contest entry and I wish you luck in it. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you, Fez. I like poetry that doesn't break the brain to read and understand. As always, I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Eigle Rull
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This poem fits the rules to a T. It says it all in a very short but adequate piece. Your rhyming is very good. This was an interesting and cool poem to read. Thank you.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
    Thank you, Eigle. Yes, I like short and easy to understand poetry. Your review is much appreciated.