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Viewing comments for Chapter 97 "A Baby's Smile"Personal poems
20 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem is sweet and creative! The author's words are clear, engaging and joyful. The artwork is precious
and compliments the theme of this poem well.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Excellent Poem! The poem is sweet and creative! The author's words are clear, engaging and joyful. The artwork is precious
and compliments the theme of this poem well.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015
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Thank you Harmony13. Yes, prescious is the perfect word for that picture.
Comment from Angel Debbie
You have a beautiful Grand-daughter. And since I haven't been on to much lately your profile picture looks great to. Your aging nicely I may say.
I love this write yes any baby that smiles brings smiles even to the grumpiest of people why because they are so innocent and cute!
Thank You for sharing Grandpa.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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You have a beautiful Grand-daughter. And since I haven't been on to much lately your profile picture looks great to. Your aging nicely I may say.
I love this write yes any baby that smiles brings smiles even to the grumpiest of people why because they are so innocent and cute!
Thank You for sharing Grandpa.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thank you Angel Debbie, for the nice reviews and for saying such nice things.
Comment from adewpearl
your lovely grand daughter has a precious smile :-)
wonderful choice of refrain line
excellent rhyming in good octogram pattern except for the forced "was overran"
effective use of question to draw the reader in
good use of regular iambic meter to create the form's characteristic cadence
an adorable tribute to this gorgeous baby :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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your lovely grand daughter has a precious smile :-)
wonderful choice of refrain line
excellent rhyming in good octogram pattern except for the forced "was overran"
effective use of question to draw the reader in
good use of regular iambic meter to create the form's characteristic cadence
an adorable tribute to this gorgeous baby :-) Brooke
Comment Written 24-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2015
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Thank you Brooke. Did you notice that her middle name is Brooke?
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yes, I did :-) I've always loved my name - I know so many people who are not happy with the name their parents chose for them - but I was always delighted with Brooke - I hope she loves it too :-)
Comment from RGstar
Whatever the rhythm or rhyme, a lovely write that your granddaughter will cherish.
A lovely Skylah in focus with that smile that you speak of.
God bless you all.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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Whatever the rhythm or rhyme, a lovely write that your granddaughter will cherish.
A lovely Skylah in focus with that smile that you speak of.
God bless you all.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 23-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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Thank you RG. I smile thinking of that smile.
Comment from risktaker
I like the rhyme scheme and the imagery. Babies' smiles are full of pure joy. They are heart captivating. they draw you to kissing, hugging, and loving them up. the photo is awesome. I love the word choice, /great job.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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I like the rhyme scheme and the imagery. Babies' smiles are full of pure joy. They are heart captivating. they draw you to kissing, hugging, and loving them up. the photo is awesome. I love the word choice, /great job.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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Thank you risktaker. Your response has me smiling.
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Comment from ravenblack
You have a very cute granddaughter and your whole poem adds depth to the traditional description of babies as bundles of joy. Their joy is pure, their smiles contagious. Excellent poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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You have a very cute granddaughter and your whole poem adds depth to the traditional description of babies as bundles of joy. Their joy is pure, their smiles contagious. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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Thank you ravenblack. Very contagious indeed.
Comment from scd41
The picture of the lovely baby is as enticing as your Octogram poem. As I learnt from the notes, writing an Octogram with syllable count and rhyme scheme is not a cakewalk. You have presented the work for beginners like me to appreciate what goes into it.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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The picture of the lovely baby is as enticing as your Octogram poem. As I learnt from the notes, writing an Octogram with syllable count and rhyme scheme is not a cakewalk. You have presented the work for beginners like me to appreciate what goes into it.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015
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Thank you scd. Im glad you liked it and appreciated the notes.
Comment from Joan E.
What a cutie pie in an endearing pose and costume! Thanks to your daughter for capturing your granddaughter's happy innocence. I hear that the lens in cell phone is better than most cameras. I enjoyed your use of the Octogram along with its repeats and your clever rhymes. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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What a cutie pie in an endearing pose and costume! Thanks to your daughter for capturing your granddaughter's happy innocence. I hear that the lens in cell phone is better than most cameras. I enjoyed your use of the Octogram along with its repeats and your clever rhymes. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Thank you Joan. Yes she always has the latest model. This one a top of line Samsung.
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Lucky her--happy photo snaps! -J
Comment from Deniz22
"I loved this shot with the smile and tiger print. Hope you enjoy it as well." I do, I do! I'm a grandfather with two daughters and 4 granddaughters so I know those special smiles. Someone once said that a baby is God's vote that the world continue....
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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"I loved this shot with the smile and tiger print. Hope you enjoy it as well." I do, I do! I'm a grandfather with two daughters and 4 granddaughters so I know those special smiles. Someone once said that a baby is God's vote that the world continue....
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Thank you Deniz. What a lovely thought. A wonderful share.
Comment from seaglass
A baby's smile can light up the day and a baby's laugh is a real mood lifter. This light poem honors the magic of a baby's smile.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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A baby's smile can light up the day and a baby's laugh is a real mood lifter. This light poem honors the magic of a baby's smile.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2015
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Thank you seaglass yes, it certainly does.
