To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Clarion of Clarity"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from BeasPeas
Well--this is an interesting take on looking at self in the mirror. I like the first two stanzas, especially the first. From that point onward your poem takes on a life of its own. The reader has more questions left unresolved than answered. My assumption is that once the mirror is destroyed, self is totally alone. Your piece prompts interpretation, but it's left for speculation. I'm rating 5 stars for mystery and the obvious talent it took to write it.
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Well--this is an interesting take on looking at self in the mirror. I like the first two stanzas, especially the first. From that point onward your poem takes on a life of its own. The reader has more questions left unresolved than answered. My assumption is that once the mirror is destroyed, self is totally alone. Your piece prompts interpretation, but it's left for speculation. I'm rating 5 stars for mystery and the obvious talent it took to write it.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from seaglass
And this is the very reason they do not allow mirrors in institutions for the severally mentally ill.
Actually, that may not be true...just speculation on my part. presentation and wording successfully gives this poem a dark...eerie mood.
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And this is the very reason they do not allow mirrors in institutions for the severally mentally ill.
Actually, that may not be true...just speculation on my part. presentation and wording successfully gives this poem a dark...eerie mood.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from mshirachot
Wow. This was different. You have captured a lot of dramatic effect with illustrating the art you've chosen with the poetic words which paint the picture even more vividly. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings to you!
Marsha
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Wow. This was different. You have captured a lot of dramatic effect with illustrating the art you've chosen with the poetic words which paint the picture even more vividly. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings to you!
Marsha
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
The depth of this free verse is amazing. It sends the mind of pondering. I love the ending where one has no choice but to face themselves.
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The depth of this free verse is amazing. It sends the mind of pondering. I love the ending where one has no choice but to face themselves.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahaha! What a great fun and a bit scary piece this was. It was beautifully presented and is a fantastic fun read. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
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Hahahahaha! What a great fun and a bit scary piece this was. It was beautifully presented and is a fantastic fun read. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of "Clarion of Clarity". As I read your poetic piece of work, it appears to me that you have a death wish! Ha. Great presentation. Carole
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To the author of "Clarion of Clarity". As I read your poetic piece of work, it appears to me that you have a death wish! Ha. Great presentation. Carole
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from pixie74
I like this poem, because I felt the emotions in it. I myself never attempted to shatter something with my fist. There's other forms of letting out frustration.
I have some poetry that expresses hurt. Most is about pain, and suffering, so I can understand where your coming from. Well be safe, and God bless.
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I like this poem, because I felt the emotions in it. I myself never attempted to shatter something with my fist. There's other forms of letting out frustration.
I have some poetry that expresses hurt. Most is about pain, and suffering, so I can understand where your coming from. Well be safe, and God bless.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
Comment from kay's story
Your picture was very appropriate for your poem. The blackness of loneliness.
Very well written very unique. Keep up the good writing. Expressed the emotion very well.
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Your picture was very appropriate for your poem. The blackness of loneliness.
Very well written very unique. Keep up the good writing. Expressed the emotion very well.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
