Crystal Clear
1-6-1 rhyming21 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a good entry for the "1-6-1 poetry writing prompt entry". YOUR OUTCOME is what makes this so unique. Yours is delightful presentation that will keep us thinking for a while. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Best of luck in the contest. May God Bless You Happy New Year
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This is a good entry for the "1-6-1 poetry writing prompt entry". YOUR OUTCOME is what makes this so unique. Yours is delightful presentation that will keep us thinking for a while. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Best of luck in the contest. May God Bless You Happy New Year
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from BeasPeas
Powerful and dynamic in this short 1-6-1. Title of "Crystal Clear" play on words (meth) is well done. It is certainly a horrible drug, but aren't they all?
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Powerful and dynamic in this short 1-6-1. Title of "Crystal Clear" play on words (meth) is well done. It is certainly a horrible drug, but aren't they all?
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from emrpoems
Great creativity
Well executed 1-6-1 form that makes complete sense and the words flow smoothly from one line to another.Stunning presentation
God luck in the contest
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Great creativity
Well executed 1-6-1 form that makes complete sense and the words flow smoothly from one line to another.Stunning presentation
God luck in the contest
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you follow the contest prompt syllable and rhyme spot on
your few words portray the message of death well when on Meth
flows easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
you follow the contest prompt syllable and rhyme spot on
your few words portray the message of death well when on Meth
flows easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from l.raven
so few words to say so much...I have never lost anyone to it...but did know someone who did it...it crazy to even start drugs like that...kills you...and your brain cells...I am so sorry about the passing of your friends...God Bless...
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so few words to say so much...I have never lost anyone to it...but did know someone who did it...it crazy to even start drugs like that...kills you...and your brain cells...I am so sorry about the passing of your friends...God Bless...
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from rjpurdy
Wow! Now that's making a point. This could be a drug prevention poster. You should consider it. It's hard to review this type of poem because they are so in your face. You have done an excellent job and secured my vote for sure. Best wishes in the voting.
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Wow! Now that's making a point. This could be a drug prevention poster. You should consider it. It's hard to review this type of poem because they are so in your face. You have done an excellent job and secured my vote for sure. Best wishes in the voting.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from vfbryant
Usually I find that these shorter poems which have been written in a certain format (such as 1-6-1), will fit the format, but either lack substance, or they will seem "forced". Yours is one of the best I've read--it seems each word is carefully chosen and the resulting message is very powerful. Well done.
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Usually I find that these shorter poems which have been written in a certain format (such as 1-6-1), will fit the format, but either lack substance, or they will seem "forced". Yours is one of the best I've read--it seems each word is carefully chosen and the resulting message is very powerful. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from acerisestory
This is a great 1-6-1, mystery poet! From the title of your poem to the last word, it is impactful.
Your syllable count is perfect, and the rhyming adds to the flow. Your accompanying artwork is a perfect accompaniment to your words.
Yours is a strong entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana
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This is a great 1-6-1, mystery poet! From the title of your poem to the last word, it is impactful.
Your syllable count is perfect, and the rhyming adds to the flow. Your accompanying artwork is a perfect accompaniment to your words.
Yours is a strong entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from mshirachot
The title for this piece is perfect. So sorry for the losses you have experienced through others addictions. The picture is very expressive. I like the way you have off set death on the other end of the line. Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings,
Marsha
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The title for this piece is perfect. So sorry for the losses you have experienced through others addictions. The picture is very expressive. I like the way you have off set death on the other end of the line. Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings,
Marsha
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
Comment from Acquired Taste
Really superb entry. An entire story and attitude in so few words. The photo is spot-on for the poem and even without that, you can feel the need and fear in your few words. It must truly be a horrific place to live. Good wishes for the contest. AT-/
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Really superb entry. An entire story and attitude in so few words. The photo is spot-on for the poem and even without that, you can feel the need and fear in your few words. It must truly be a horrific place to live. Good wishes for the contest. AT-/
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
