Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Rastavius Returns"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
16 total reviews
Comment from amahra
This remains to be a very unique story. There is noting on here like this. You write this kind of story so well. Very intriguing chapter. Great job.
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This remains to be a very unique story. There is noting on here like this. You write this kind of story so well. Very intriguing chapter. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
Comment from robina1978
An extremely good chapter. A stranger approaches the house and they invite him in. It turns out that he is looking for the 'evil ones'. They all say they don't know.
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An extremely good chapter. A stranger approaches the house and they invite him in. It turns out that he is looking for the 'evil ones'. They all say they don't know.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very good scene! You portray the disgusting sickos well. One question: How could they possibly find Julia by going down the road if she's hiding out in a forest cottage?
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Very good scene! You portray the disgusting sickos well. One question: How could they possibly find Julia by going down the road if she's hiding out in a forest cottage?
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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She hasn't reached it yet. They are on their way to the cottage as the priests are traveling towards Abramus' house. So, Cassius has to run ahead to warn his dad while they hide. I can't believe how long this has become. It's supposed to be one life of many. How in the world do I follow this one? Hahaha. mikey
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Use the rule of threes. THree lives is enough. You do not need a fourth. Let them fall in love again now and stay in love.
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That is probably sensible, but the best story is yet to come and there are a couple others that are good too. I wanted to bring them to the present. Hahaha. I sound like I'm about eight years old and want a pony!!!
Comment from CR Delport
Rastavius had made his intentions clear, and it took a lot of self control from Abramus to remain calm. Cassius is young and couldn't contain himself. Another well crafted chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Rastavius had made his intentions clear, and it took a lot of self control from Abramus to remain calm. Cassius is young and couldn't contain himself. Another well crafted chapter.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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It's heating up and it has to reach a conclusion at some point. But, I love this story. It's difficult to stop writing it! mikey
Comment from Sasha
I love this story too. I fear I am beginning to sound like a broken record again, but you have done a superb job with this chapter (and the entire book. I anxiously look forward to reading the next post.
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I love this story too. I fear I am beginning to sound like a broken record again, but you have done a superb job with this chapter (and the entire book. I anxiously look forward to reading the next post.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from Drew Delaney
Quite an interesting story you have going on, Michael. Would you call it Medieval? Just wondering because I appreciate the Medieval genre, but know not that much about it. Keep up the good work.
Drew
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Quite an interesting story you have going on, Michael. Would you call it Medieval? Just wondering because I appreciate the Medieval genre, but know not that much about it. Keep up the good work.
Drew
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
The battle is heating up. Leopold is bringing in powerful people. They have warned Abraham. Cassius is out to warn the children and their care givers. It is going to be hard to keep him from mouthing off in defense of his sister. Great work.
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The battle is heating up. Leopold is bringing in powerful people. They have warned Abraham. Cassius is out to warn the children and their care givers. It is going to be hard to keep him from mouthing off in defense of his sister. Great work.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from Michaelk
So the die is cast. They are actively hunting for Julia and the others. Honestly, I don't thin it will take long for them to figure out where they are. The priests seemed to be two steps ahead in the conversation with Abramus. I did like that both Abramus and Casius stood up for what they believe. I think that will be the preists undoing. People who aren't afraid to stand up to them.
Great chapter. Still going strong.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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So the die is cast. They are actively hunting for Julia and the others. Honestly, I don't thin it will take long for them to figure out where they are. The priests seemed to be two steps ahead in the conversation with Abramus. I did like that both Abramus and Casius stood up for what they believe. I think that will be the preists undoing. People who aren't afraid to stand up to them.
Great chapter. Still going strong.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
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I have them in the forest where I want them. I'm just trying to set it up so that the resistance makes sense. The power is in the hands of the priests unless allies can be found. But, the forest is dark and concealing. Things can happen there. :)) Great review as are all of yours. Thought I'd better answer one just in case it's been months! I'll get caught up on reviewing soon. mikey
Comment from Gargantuan2
Interesting thought to the story, is there information to be gained from the vision Julia can use to aid in their current situation? I see nothing to improve this chapter and await the unfolding of events :)
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Interesting thought to the story, is there information to be gained from the vision Julia can use to aid in their current situation? I see nothing to improve this chapter and await the unfolding of events :)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
The tension level of this is incredible. I did not think you would be able to ramp this up another notch but damn, was I wrong. This is one of the best books I have read anywhere. Bravoo!!
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The tension level of this is incredible. I did not think you would be able to ramp this up another notch but damn, was I wrong. This is one of the best books I have read anywhere. Bravoo!!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
