Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 197 "Tangerine Sky"Small and Specialty Poems
10 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I love the phrase, "tangerine sky". Wonderfully descriptive and perfect for your photo. This poem is particularly well written. "Nearest to shades of campfire flame." Super!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
I love the phrase, "tangerine sky". Wonderfully descriptive and perfect for your photo. This poem is particularly well written. "Nearest to shades of campfire flame." Super!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Thank you, glad you likes it.
Comment from rod007
The unity of nature with living things creates an artistic blend that is amazing, hence these lines were magnificent:
"Night birds are singing out their last lullabies,
Giving voice in the soft evening breeze."
Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
The unity of nature with living things creates an artistic blend that is amazing, hence these lines were magnificent:
"Night birds are singing out their last lullabies,
Giving voice in the soft evening breeze."
Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you rod. Wonderful review.
Comment from RGstar
Good luck in the competition. Nice imagery projected here. Nice image and colour to depict the aura of autumn.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
Good luck in the competition. Nice imagery projected here. Nice image and colour to depict the aura of autumn.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you RG.
Comment from Capricorn30
Well-penned dedication--lovely acrostic to setting sun;
Good visual imagery complements the stunning photography;
"tangerine sky":
"tree branches shown in dark silhouette";
Nice audio:
"Night birds are singing our their last lullabies";
So many abundant sights and sounds to complete our day in nature's wondrous ways.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
Well-penned dedication--lovely acrostic to setting sun;
Good visual imagery complements the stunning photography;
"tangerine sky":
"tree branches shown in dark silhouette";
Nice audio:
"Night birds are singing our their last lullabies";
So many abundant sights and sounds to complete our day in nature's wondrous ways.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you Margaret. I dig your acessment.
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Joan E.
You are so prescient--we had a bit of a tangerine sky tonight! Your acrostic is so seamless, I might have missed the form without the top note--your maintaining the alternating rhymes was quite an accomplishment. As usual, your photograph is stunning. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
You are so prescient--we had a bit of a tangerine sky tonight! Your acrostic is so seamless, I might have missed the form without the top note--your maintaining the alternating rhymes was quite an accomplishment. As usual, your photograph is stunning. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Joan. Your observation made my day.
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More smiles and sweet dreams. I hope tomorrow is another great day! -Joan
Comment from Maureen's Pen
A beautiful and graceful acrostic Tom. Filled with all I love, nature at its best. Good luck in the contest my friend and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
A beautiful and graceful acrostic Tom. Filled with all I love, nature at its best. Good luck in the contest my friend and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Maureen. I look forward to the day you can walk again in nature at you Bon Echo home.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is such a lovely acrostic, Tom, your rhyme is so smooth, which is very hard to do when you are limited to using one letter to start with. Your photo is so beautiful too, rhyme and photo, perfect. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
That is such a lovely acrostic, Tom, your rhyme is so smooth, which is very hard to do when you are limited to using one letter to start with. Your photo is so beautiful too, rhyme and photo, perfect. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Sandra. I never do well, but i still try. Thanks for the kind words and support.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Another of one your gems using a format that I always try and avoid. Your rhyme scheme is right on. I enjoyed this Tangerine Sky a lot.
TK
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
Another of one your gems using a format that I always try and avoid. Your rhyme scheme is right on. I enjoyed this Tangerine Sky a lot.
TK
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank again Sir T
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are filled with color,
beauty and description. The artwork captures this amazing sky well and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
Excellent Poem! The author's words are filled with color,
beauty and description. The artwork captures this amazing sky well and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you harmony.
Comment from patcelaw
This acrostic is smooth in the flow of its words. The presentation is outstanding. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Blessings, Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
This acrostic is smooth in the flow of its words. The presentation is outstanding. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Blessings, Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you Pat, for the review and best wishes.