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Comment from Joan E.
Your tribute was especially meaningful to me because my husband and I celebrated our 43rd anniversary in September. I enjoyed your Quatern, repeating line and rhyme scheme. Here's to many, many happy returns of your special day! -Joan
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
Your tribute was especially meaningful to me because my husband and I celebrated our 43rd anniversary in September. I enjoyed your Quatern, repeating line and rhyme scheme. Here's to many, many happy returns of your special day! -Joan
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Ihank you Joan. Congrats on your aniversary too.
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We four are rare birds--fly high on your 39th! Many hugs- Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
How lovely, Tom, and we can see that twinkle in her eyes, too. You have been blessed with a lovely bride and a lovely married life together. 40 years, your ruby anniversary next year. That is special. I wish you and your wife, many, many more happy years together. :) xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
How lovely, Tom, and we can see that twinkle in her eyes, too. You have been blessed with a lovely bride and a lovely married life together. 40 years, your ruby anniversary next year. That is special. I wish you and your wife, many, many more happy years together. :) xsx Sandra
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Thank you for a nice review and wonderful wishes.
Comment from robina1978
You don't see a quatern very often. Your wife looks nice and cheerful. What a long time the two of you lasted. Happy anniversary and many to come.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
You don't see a quatern very often. Your wife looks nice and cheerful. What a long time the two of you lasted. Happy anniversary and many to come.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Thank you Ine. Such a nice review and well wishes.
Comment from rod007
A great poem and a wonderful tribute to your wife. Also a superb achievement, a marriage of near forty years and a cause for celebration. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
A great poem and a wonderful tribute to your wife. Also a superb achievement, a marriage of near forty years and a cause for celebration. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Thank you rod. I only wish you could have had the same satisfaction.
Comment from DSMalott
Very sweet.
Lovely form and the nicely structured rhymes were well placed and unforced to express such heart felt love.
Thanks for writing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
Very sweet.
Lovely form and the nicely structured rhymes were well placed and unforced to express such heart felt love.
Thanks for writing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Thank you DSMalott.
Comment from tfawcus
What a stunning use of the quatern to underline the abiding importance of that twinkle in the eye. I imagine that your poem would have caused those eyes to truly sparkle with delight.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
What a stunning use of the quatern to underline the abiding importance of that twinkle in the eye. I imagine that your poem would have caused those eyes to truly sparkle with delight.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Thank you tfawcus. Yes, she liked it.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Very nice tribute to a very lovely lady Mr.T Have you been taking lesson from me or maybe I have learned from you those words of love. Great work sir and may she always have that twinkle in eye.
TK
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
Very nice tribute to a very lovely lady Mr.T Have you been taking lesson from me or maybe I have learned from you those words of love. Great work sir and may she always have that twinkle in eye.
TK
Comment Written 15-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Thank you Sir T. You always provide a good example when it comes to a good romantic verse.
Comment from Dawny53
I just think it's really nice of you to have wrote this lovely poem as a tribute to your wife.. she must feel quite proud indeed! I also appreciate your authors notes, which are quite interesting all by themselves!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
I just think it's really nice of you to have wrote this lovely poem as a tribute to your wife.. she must feel quite proud indeed! I also appreciate your authors notes, which are quite interesting all by themselves!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Thank you Dawny. Im glad you liked both.
Comment from patcelaw
What a wonderful tribute to a fine looking lady. Her face show such compassion and you are a lucky man to know her sweetness. 39 years of marriage is quite a feat in these times. Congrats. Pat
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
What a wonderful tribute to a fine looking lady. Her face show such compassion and you are a lucky man to know her sweetness. 39 years of marriage is quite a feat in these times. Congrats. Pat
Comment Written 15-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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Thank you pat fot the review and sentiments.