First 5 Years Of Marriage
Stories of our firast 5 years of marriage.8 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Pat,
Wow, that was some moving around. Sounds like Tom and I. We've moved around a fair bit in the almost 22 yrs we've been married.
It's the pits when you have little one running around and you get sick. Not a good time.
Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
Hi, Pat,
Wow, that was some moving around. Sounds like Tom and I. We've moved around a fair bit in the almost 22 yrs we've been married.
It's the pits when you have little one running around and you get sick. Not a good time.
Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 09-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review and it was indeed the pits to be so sick. It was that way for about 2 years before the doctors finally knew I need surgery to correct the problem.
Comment from Jackarrie
Another chapter in your early married life, The memories of having each child, brought me back to my pregnancies. My husband worked in the Irish airlines. We had a small cottage for the first four years. It is amazing how many our lives are simular
Well written
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
Another chapter in your early married life, The memories of having each child, brought me back to my pregnancies. My husband worked in the Irish airlines. We had a small cottage for the first four years. It is amazing how many our lives are simular
Well written
Mary
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thanks Mary. it is funny how often our lives can be so alike in many ways.
Comment from emrpoems
An interesting chapter about your pregnancies. This highlights the responsibilities and functions of a woman. These vary slightly from one person to another. an enjoyable read
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
An interesting chapter about your pregnancies. This highlights the responsibilities and functions of a woman. These vary slightly from one person to another. an enjoyable read
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Sankey
Thanks for sharing. What a story. Notice the kids are all "P's" hehe! Good work I like reading autobiographies as you know I have written my own as well.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
Thanks for sharing. What a story. Notice the kids are all "P's" hehe! Good work I like reading autobiographies as you know I have written my own as well.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review. Yes I know you did your own bio and you like them. We thought about changing Wayne to Paul so we would have 5 P's in a pod. :-)
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Sorry did I miss something was there a boy in there? Or is that still coming?
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Wayne was my husband and father of the girls.
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So you wanted to rename him a P as well right ha! Joke of course hehe!
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Yes, it was a joke, actually my husband came up with the joke.
Comment from Geanie
Very interesting story. I would have enjoyed it better if there weren't so many errors in grammar. It needed to be proof read, edited. The sixth sentence is separated by one too many 'but'. Another, Penny "go hold of her ample hair." All in all, being a mom with 7 children, I related to the scene quite well. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
Very interesting story. I would have enjoyed it better if there weren't so many errors in grammar. It needed to be proof read, edited. The sixth sentence is separated by one too many 'but'. Another, Penny "go hold of her ample hair." All in all, being a mom with 7 children, I related to the scene quite well. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Nosha17
Interesting story of your early married life with your pregnancies. Those 3 young children must have certainly kept you busy. I spotted couple of adjustments, hope you don't mind. Para 1, faithful in lifting me up. Para 4, line 4....and after doing so, declared............., whereupon he broke the bag. Para 5, line 4.....saying that we ladies had done a good job of.............Para 7, line 1, about the time when....... Hope you find this helpful. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
Interesting story of your early married life with your pregnancies. Those 3 young children must have certainly kept you busy. I spotted couple of adjustments, hope you don't mind. Para 1, faithful in lifting me up. Para 4, line 4....and after doing so, declared............., whereupon he broke the bag. Para 5, line 4.....saying that we ladies had done a good job of.............Para 7, line 1, about the time when....... Hope you find this helpful. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thank you Faye for the review. I always find suggestions about my work helpful and I don't mind as long as the suggestions are fair.
Comment from Genya
Really enjoyed reading about your early days of marriage, the thorns and the roses. How hard it is to bring up three children and try to keep home. Just realised all your children's names begin with P. Interesting to read about your life, the moves, the ups and downs. Thank you so much for opening your life for people to read. Noticed a small typo....para. 9 I wrapped pPenny. ...thought it worth a mention. Take care. Genya
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
Really enjoyed reading about your early days of marriage, the thorns and the roses. How hard it is to bring up three children and try to keep home. Just realised all your children's names begin with P. Interesting to read about your life, the moves, the ups and downs. Thank you so much for opening your life for people to read. Noticed a small typo....para. 9 I wrapped pPenny. ...thought it worth a mention. Take care. Genya
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Okay thanks for the review and point out the typo. Yews all their names begin with a P, intentional on our part. We thought of changing Wayne to Paul so there would be 5 peas in the pod.:-)
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Love it, 5 peas in a pod. Genya
Comment from Caressa_08
I thought twins can't have twins, though I think that is a myth...My first born, I had to take care of her for months on end, by myself...I loved it, my husband out to sea, & I was in a strange town without any family around..Sometimes, for me, has been quite a blessing, though hubby , sure wish he could of been there to be an early new father.....Though in a somewhat, safe environment then, Navy housing.
Some people, & even close relative, can be so disheartening, criticizing. You would think people close would understand, though yet miles away to comprehend from what you have to endure..Though, just wait til these same people have problems of their own, those who like to be so judgemental of others....They think then its the end of their world, complaining so that their life was turned upside down... Hopefully, they learned a lesson about what they did to people in the past. As what goes around, comes around..
Thanks for sharing, Pat, I enjoyed the read.....Caressa
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
I thought twins can't have twins, though I think that is a myth...My first born, I had to take care of her for months on end, by myself...I loved it, my husband out to sea, & I was in a strange town without any family around..Sometimes, for me, has been quite a blessing, though hubby , sure wish he could of been there to be an early new father.....Though in a somewhat, safe environment then, Navy housing.
Some people, & even close relative, can be so disheartening, criticizing. You would think people close would understand, though yet miles away to comprehend from what you have to endure..Though, just wait til these same people have problems of their own, those who like to be so judgemental of others....They think then its the end of their world, complaining so that their life was turned upside down... Hopefully, they learned a lesson about what they did to people in the past. As what goes around, comes around..
Thanks for sharing, Pat, I enjoyed the read.....Caressa
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thanks Caressa for the nice review. The one who was critical came to an end when she was 52 years old as she had an awful marriage and she did something stupid that cost her life in the end, and all to please a man who was not worth what it cost her.
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Thanks for your reply, & letting me know about this person..I added a little extra & corrected it some, my review as you know,.. eyes can sure play tricks on you..C.
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My eye problem causesme to miss some things and i appreciate others telling me where a problem exists.