Little Poems
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Comment from ravenblack
I like your instructive contrasts between rhythms- the martial beat and the waltz. And of course all who choose to March to the beat of a different drummer.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
I like your instructive contrasts between rhythms- the martial beat and the waltz. And of course all who choose to March to the beat of a different drummer.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thank you ravenblack, even though the boogaloo is more your style. Lol.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for demonstrating the beats of these meters. I enjoyed your marching, shuffling and waltzing descriptions, plus your fun rhymes. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
Thank you for demonstrating the beats of these meters. I enjoyed your marching, shuffling and waltzing descriptions, plus your fun rhymes. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2014
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Thank you Joan. Many dont get this one.
Comment from rod007
You are one of the masters of poetry on this site and I agree with your observations of the two different types of poetry. I write poetry from the gut, I'm a complete amateur so it is nice to learn from you. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
You are one of the masters of poetry on this site and I agree with your observations of the two different types of poetry. I write poetry from the gut, I'm a complete amateur so it is nice to learn from you. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you rod, for a wonderful review and nice compliment.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a good idea for a poem, Tom, and I have to say, I much prefer the beat of the Anaoestic, (being a fan of the waltz!) I loved how it moved along. But, I do write a lot in the Iambic style, but will try to do more in the Anaoestic. I loved that one. :) Sandra xsx
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
What a good idea for a poem, Tom, and I have to say, I much prefer the beat of the Anaoestic, (being a fan of the waltz!) I loved how it moved along. But, I do write a lot in the Iambic style, but will try to do more in the Anaoestic. I loved that one. :) Sandra xsx
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you Sandra. Yes, i need to write that more too.
Comment from Capricorn30
Music parallels poetry in achieving perfect rhythm, the correct flow of words;
Thank you for the imperative information, always many options for the poet, novice or experienced.
I can hear the "da-Dums" playing in my head.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
Music parallels poetry in achieving perfect rhythm, the correct flow of words;
Thank you for the imperative information, always many options for the poet, novice or experienced.
I can hear the "da-Dums" playing in my head.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you Margaret. Then ket the rhythmn flow.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Well if this isn't just a dandy way to explain a couple of writing techniques. Nice to know that not only do I get entertained by an outstanding writer but I am learning something new at the same time. Thank you Mr T
TK
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
Well if this isn't just a dandy way to explain a couple of writing techniques. Nice to know that not only do I get entertained by an outstanding writer but I am learning something new at the same time. Thank you Mr T
TK
Comment Written 07-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014
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Thank you TK. See and old dog can learn! Lol.
Comment from vapros
This is a clever and demonstrative explanation of two of the rhythmic choices available to poets. I'm quite certain that a lot of pretty good poetry is produced without any such recognition by the writer. However, here it is, for all who are interested. Good work.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
This is a clever and demonstrative explanation of two of the rhythmic choices available to poets. I'm quite certain that a lot of pretty good poetry is produced without any such recognition by the writer. However, here it is, for all who are interested. Good work.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Thank you Vapros
Comment from Allison78
I thought this was great, I love the sound of both, it's just so pleasant to read! Great great job on this and also for helping us learn!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
I thought this was great, I love the sound of both, it's just so pleasant to read! Great great job on this and also for helping us learn!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
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Thank you Alison.