Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

God certainly blessed you with a good family life.
Have you ever tried to see your son??. With computers these days it is not impossible. Maybe the place he was born and the date could be a lead. You don't seem to mind everyone knowing about him so I don't see any problem. He may love to see the wonderful lady that gave birth to him

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Thanks for the review. As far as the son is concerned, be patient. There is more to come. But if you are too impatient you can hear my story at

www.oneplace.com/ministries.unshackled

It is a radio drama of my life, the program numbers are 3325 and 3326. My name on the program Each part take 30 minutes. Listen to the part one first so the second part will make complete sense.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

God blessed you with for children and what a blessing to have to love no matter what.
God does things for a reason and as I told my children about my life so when they hear it from others they know the truth from a lie.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Thanks for the review. God did give me four children and I love them all, Each is special in a different way.

reply by misscookie on 06-Nov-2014

We are blessed that our children are so different. I would go crazy if they all were the same. having ways like aunts uncles mom and dad to name a few is enough.

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

This is an interesting outline of your marriage years before your daughters were grown. Very clever of you to leave their dresses unhemmed until school started. 8-)

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Thank you for the nice review.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I enjoyed the continuation of your story. I know what it is like to have so many miscarriages My daughter had 5 before she became pregnant. Fostering is a lovely thing to do to help children who have problems.

Well written , Mary

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Thank you Mary for the review. To have had 3 miscarriages was a very hard thing for both my husband and myself. But God did give us 3 lovely daughters.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat,

What a great photo. Thx for sharing it and your story. I can only imagine how difficult it is to foster someone for three years and then have them leave.

It takes a great love to do what you and your hubby did in becoming foster parents. Good for you.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

It was hard to give up a child who was with us for 3 years, but the county was asking me to go against my beliefs and that I was not willing to do, as I did not want to do what the county said and say another thing to my own children.

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

This is an interesting story line to follow that details the difficulties of raising a family and choices that must be made.

There are some spacing problems and breaks in the text that you might want to correct. Also, be careful of repeating the same word in a sentence if a substitute word could be found. Example:

I had wanted a son, but never had a son.
I had wanted a son, but only had daughters.

Thank you.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Thanks for thr review, The spacing problems are not my fault as it seems there is a glitch in the system. I don't know what else to do.

reply by Fridayauthor on 04-Nov-2014

Usually, when you go into "edit" you can correct these space problems by hand. It may be you can only do so it "advanced edit" but I use that all the time anyway, wherever I post. It lets me use italics and bold type if i want to.

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

I have tried to correct with advance edit and it is still coming up wrong.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Nice photo of your daughter, Patricia that complements this chapter very well. You had difficulties getting children, hubby needed op and your thyroid was not right. Later you took in foster children.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014

Thanks for the review. Yes we did indeed have trouble conceiving children. And finally had the 3 lovely daughters and took in foster girls who were all troubled teens. Having come from a background of abuse and misbehavior on my part, I pretty well understood troubled teens.