How to Avoid Cute
The Dilemma of Lifes Final Act23 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
However, last I checked, I still possess a fully functioning brain and am capable of some degree of intelligent thought.
I told someone this recently. He said I need to get a second opinion.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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However, last I checked, I still possess a fully functioning brain and am capable of some degree of intelligent thought.
I told someone this recently. He said I need to get a second opinion.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Well, as a rule I try my best to avoid feedback on this particular statement. I'm certain there are those who would question my confidence/perspective. But that's my story and I'm sticking to it; I suggest you do the same!😀
Thanks for the read!
Comment from Lady Jane
When I think of cute, my mind directly falls upon images of puppy dogs, butterflies, little girls floofy dresses. I seriously don't like being called cute. Not everyone may feel that way, yes, I"m middle aged, but I do. You penned your opinion well with no flaws or edit requirements. Good job and keep writing.
Janelle
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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When I think of cute, my mind directly falls upon images of puppy dogs, butterflies, little girls floofy dresses. I seriously don't like being called cute. Not everyone may feel that way, yes, I"m middle aged, but I do. You penned your opinion well with no flaws or edit requirements. Good job and keep writing.
Janelle
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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I agree with your associations to cute, i.e. puppies and butterflies.
Most times people don't actually come out and call me cute, it's more implied by their demeanor. When one is of a certain age (don't you just love euphemisms?), people sometimes use a patronizing tone. It is very condescending.
Thank you for your kind and interesting review, I enjoyed it.
Comment from Insignificant Weed
Well, I don't consider myself "cute," but now that I am over 70, I have reached that stage in life where I can do and say anything I want! But the question is - can I still do it? This is a five star entry for the truthfulness of expression and for the creative approach to the aging process. I am new at this reviewing procedure, but wanted to point out some minor grammatical errors: "the head of the Gray Panthers sadly, that did not occur." - "sadly" is an interrupter and needs to be set off with commas. If you have a reason for not using it, I stand corrected. In this line: "At this point in life kids pretty much thrive . . ." -there should be a comma after "kids" as it is the end of an introductory phrase.
You background indicated that you lived in Europe and was wondering if your outlook framed this description: "then buddy fire those puppies up and let the world have it with both barrels." I'm not sure I understand what this means, particularly "buddy fire those puppies up". I profess my ignorance.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Well, I don't consider myself "cute," but now that I am over 70, I have reached that stage in life where I can do and say anything I want! But the question is - can I still do it? This is a five star entry for the truthfulness of expression and for the creative approach to the aging process. I am new at this reviewing procedure, but wanted to point out some minor grammatical errors: "the head of the Gray Panthers sadly, that did not occur." - "sadly" is an interrupter and needs to be set off with commas. If you have a reason for not using it, I stand corrected. In this line: "At this point in life kids pretty much thrive . . ." -there should be a comma after "kids" as it is the end of an introductory phrase.
You background indicated that you lived in Europe and was wondering if your outlook framed this description: "then buddy fire those puppies up and let the world have it with both barrels." I'm not sure I understand what this means, particularly "buddy fire those puppies up". I profess my ignorance.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you for reviewing this piece and for the punctuation catches.
As for the saying "fire those puppies up", it has nothing to do with my living in Europe and everything with living in Texas for the past 20 years! Texans have a very unique way of expressing themselves and at times, I get caught up in the vernacular. I simply meant that if one still has full mental acuity at an advance age, then they should not be shy about letting folks know.
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Oops - in my comment about the comma, it should be after "life," not "kids." Need to edit more carefully. grr Thank you for your clarifying response about the puppies.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
I am not a Fiction writer but something made me read this piece of work. I was refreshed, amused, stimulated and delighted! What can be said in addition to this soliloquy, except that it is a must-read joy for all ages. And that its ideas are faithful to truth, truth that never ages.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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I am not a Fiction writer but something made me read this piece of work. I was refreshed, amused, stimulated and delighted! What can be said in addition to this soliloquy, except that it is a must-read joy for all ages. And that its ideas are faithful to truth, truth that never ages.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for the six star review! I am so pleased that you liked the piece and found it entertaining!
Comment from D. K. Mamula
This is so perfect! I will be 53 this year and I keep telling everyone that I am just getting started. Your words are inspiring and uplifting. Your piece made me laugh out loud and brightened my day! Well-written and fun! Nice job and good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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This is so perfect! I will be 53 this year and I keep telling everyone that I am just getting started. Your words are inspiring and uplifting. Your piece made me laugh out loud and brightened my day! Well-written and fun! Nice job and good luck!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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I so appreciate the six star review and am very happy you found the piece amusing and up lifting. And at 53 you truly are just getting started!
Comment from Miranda Langston
this is such a "cute" poem :D i'm sorry. i couldn't resist. This is such an amusing piece and it was a great way to wake up. I love the quote you added in at the bottom. I feel it added even more to the story
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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this is such a "cute" poem :D i'm sorry. i couldn't resist. This is such an amusing piece and it was a great way to wake up. I love the quote you added in at the bottom. I feel it added even more to the story
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your witty review. I am pleased that you found the piece amusing, because that was exactly what I was going for.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Beautiful! Wonderful Bravo! I am so with you in your sentiments, ma'am! :) :) Such a wonderful and well-written piece -- it encompasses so much of what we experience as we fight against the wrinkles that are the harbingers of the "cute" -- LOL!! Just a note, and you might have done it on purpose, but "presences" seems like it might work better as a single 'presence' -- as I said, if it was on purpose, ignore the comment.....the piece is wonderful!!
Thank you for sharing it and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Beautiful! Wonderful Bravo! I am so with you in your sentiments, ma'am! :) :) Such a wonderful and well-written piece -- it encompasses so much of what we experience as we fight against the wrinkles that are the harbingers of the "cute" -- LOL!! Just a note, and you might have done it on purpose, but "presences" seems like it might work better as a single 'presence' -- as I said, if it was on purpose, ignore the comment.....the piece is wonderful!!
Thank you for sharing it and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Glad you found the piece entertaining. Also, thanks for the catch on "presences"! I made the change.
Comment from Judy Couch
I like your essay on aging and on being cute. There is something to say for being allowed to tell the world what you think. Writing helps to stave off alzheimer, too.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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I like your essay on aging and on being cute. There is something to say for being allowed to tell the world what you think. Writing helps to stave off alzheimer, too.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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I do think writers have a bit of an edge when it comes to retaining mental acuity.
Glad you liked this and I appreciate the review.
Marisa
Comment from Shari1962
Southern girls are raised to be respectful to their elders - at least in my generation. When I see older people treated like children, it really bothers me. I hope I will be just the way you describe the woman in this work.
Your work is thought provoking. Thank you for this perspective.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Southern girls are raised to be respectful to their elders - at least in my generation. When I see older people treated like children, it really bothers me. I hope I will be just the way you describe the woman in this work.
Your work is thought provoking. Thank you for this perspective.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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I too hate to see older people being condescended to, it's so disrespectful.
I'm happy you liked this piece. Here's to a lively last act for all of us.
Marisa
Comment from Adri7enne
I don't know how I missed this one. It's so cute! LOL! I tend to agree with you, Marisa. I think after a certain age, one should get over the disease to please and live with gusto and a larger sense of entitlement. I am gobbling my veggies with the intention of living a long and healthy old age, just so I can annoy lots of uptight people.
I love how you write. It just seems to spill from you, like water from a fountain. You make it look so easy. Good luck in the contest!!!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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I don't know how I missed this one. It's so cute! LOL! I tend to agree with you, Marisa. I think after a certain age, one should get over the disease to please and live with gusto and a larger sense of entitlement. I am gobbling my veggies with the intention of living a long and healthy old age, just so I can annoy lots of uptight people.
I love how you write. It just seems to spill from you, like water from a fountain. You make it look so easy. Good luck in the contest!!!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Adri,
I really appreciate your comments and I'm glad to hear you are preparing to live that last act, when it finally arrives, with gusto.
Marisa
