Love Story Of Wayne and Pat Lawrence
This is the final chapter of this story.12 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I finally got my answered. In the beginning it was your words that I was reading but in the last few chapters it was Wayne's writing that I was reading. Good luck in the contest.
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 03-Oct-2019
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I finally got my answered. In the beginning it was your words that I was reading but in the last few chapters it was Wayne's writing that I was reading. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you for wanting to be my fan. Rosemary Everson1
Comment from adewpearl
After the reception line was finished, we went - add comma
When we looked closely at the napkins, we noticed - add comma
We didn't know who had the wire, but - add comma
500 feet deep, which made Pat - add comma
When we arrived back in the California area, - add comma
our life together it is only - put either a period or a semicolon after "together"
What a great idea for a book and a wonderful legacy to hand down through generations of your family :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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After the reception line was finished, we went - add comma
When we looked closely at the napkins, we noticed - add comma
We didn't know who had the wire, but - add comma
500 feet deep, which made Pat - add comma
When we arrived back in the California area, - add comma
our life together it is only - put either a period or a semicolon after "together"
What a great idea for a book and a wonderful legacy to hand down through generations of your family :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2014
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Thank you for the review and for the needed corrections I appreciate it.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a wonderful story, patricia, I am glad you shared it with us and I know it is a precious memory you will always have co-writing a book together. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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this is a wonderful story, patricia, I am glad you shared it with us and I know it is a precious memory you will always have co-writing a book together. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you there is still more to come to my story. A lot of things which I had to endure, but praise God I made it through some difficulties.
Comment from robina1978
I am so sorry that your husband passes away but he and you leave this beautiful memory of the first part of your marriage. I had to laugh about the thought of gambling on your wedding night.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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I am so sorry that your husband passes away but he and you leave this beautiful memory of the first part of your marriage. I had to laugh about the thought of gambling on your wedding night.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review. The wonderful part of this story is that our daughters were on our minds as we worked together to write the story. On our honeymoon I was not old enough to gamble, however I doubt anyone would have questioned us as I looked old enough.
Comment from misscookie
I enjoyed reading your story very much/ It's nice when youcan pass those happy times do9wn to your children
thank you very much for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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I enjoyed reading your story very much/ It's nice when youcan pass those happy times do9wn to your children
thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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You are very welcome. Until next time
Cookie
Comment from Caressa_08
Such a joyous day described for your wedding described by Wayne & yourself, interesting, humorous details about the cake & that photographer ...I have only been to Las Vegas once, & it was when my husband drove us there, about 1972 on our way back from California, arriving he did back to Long Beach, then the Naval shipyard, after his ship came back there from Vietnam....He drove us back through the mountainous states, two-laners still then in places, the way back to Illinois, as I didn't have my driver's license .. Very nice read...Thanks, Pat.
Caressa
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Such a joyous day described for your wedding described by Wayne & yourself, interesting, humorous details about the cake & that photographer ...I have only been to Las Vegas once, & it was when my husband drove us there, about 1972 on our way back from California, arriving he did back to Long Beach, then the Naval shipyard, after his ship came back there from Vietnam....He drove us back through the mountainous states, two-laners still then in places, the way back to Illinois, as I didn't have my driver's license .. Very nice read...Thanks, Pat.
Caressa
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it. Wayne and I had a wonderful time writing this story for our children.
Comment from boxergirl
Another delightful story of your new life with Wayne. I like how he includes personal details like being saved and the wedding reception with the cake was very amusing. 8-)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Another delightful story of your new life with Wayne. I like how he includes personal details like being saved and the wedding reception with the cake was very amusing. 8-)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you for your review. Wayne love to alk about his faith and his love for details.
Comment from emrpoems
At the Lake Meade Lodge we in late January--something seems to be missing here.
Very touching to read the memoirs of a couple who remained in love for such a long time . I think you were ordained by God Himself and for that you must be thankful. may the rest of your life be just as fulfilling.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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At the Lake Meade Lodge we in late January--something seems to be missing here.
Very touching to read the memoirs of a couple who remained in love for such a long time . I think you were ordained by God Himself and for that you must be thankful. may the rest of your life be just as fulfilling.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the review.
At the Lake Meade Lodge we in late January should have read like this
At the Lake Meade Lodge in late January,
I have it corrected now.
Comment from Jackarrie
Those memories written by your husband before he passed on must mean so much to you. It must have been so emotional for him to write for his family.
You have repeated two of the chapters by mistake.
I enjoyed reading it, well done
Mary
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Those memories written by your husband before he passed on must mean so much to you. It must have been so emotional for him to write for his family.
You have repeated two of the chapters by mistake.
I enjoyed reading it, well done
Mary
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the review, Mary. He didn't know how long he had to live at this point, but knew he wanted to share some of his memories with his daughters. The girls were so pleased their daddy did that for them.
Comment from CR Delport
I love it when the big businesses start a price war. Then we can get something for a bargain that we would normally ill afford. Although I haven't read the previous postings, this is interesting and well written. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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I love it when the big businesses start a price war. Then we can get something for a bargain that we would normally ill afford. Although I haven't read the previous postings, this is interesting and well written. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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CR Delport thanks so much for reading my work. I do hope you might go back and read previous chapters. Alll the stories are a true accounting of my life., as well the next chapters. I don't know yet how many chapter there will be.
