Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I'll continue reading your saga. I'm not sure if the chapters are written for the next reads but will find out. Good luck in the contest. See you at the polls. Onto the next chapter.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Pat. I would call this a good old fashion love story for sure. It has good story telling quality to it and for me I love that the chapter is not too long. Kept my interest and attention. Well written. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it.
It is the kind of love story where the bad girls is finally rewarded for doing the right thing. God blessed me with this wonderful man.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Well-crafted piece you have delivered Patcelaw, I enjoyed this read throughout and must tell you, I am usually not a fan of the romance LOL. I am a fan of this piece. God bless!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014

Thanks for thee review. It was an accounting from my husband of over 36 years about out lve story. He wrote it, I edited and proof read it. He wrote 19 stories of his life the last years of his life for his daughters, and that was the last Christmas gift he gave to his girls.

reply by Neonewman on 31-Oct-2014

Yes, I remember that piece you submitted. God bless!

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

A funny chapter. You want to move the wedding to earlier, and have certain people at your side. The best bit I thought was sleeping together under your mother's supervision.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014

Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it. My hubby was a funny man so the sleeping together line was a bit of his humor.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Aunt Ruth and Uncle Orrick lived lived on the corner --delete lived which is repeated typo

A real pleasure reading of the good old happy days of two young people in love.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thank you for the review and pointing out the typo, it has been corrected.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Pat, this story is a repeat of the last one, it has the same content about your telling about how you gave up your son 9 months previous.
Mary

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

I am sorry I picked up the wrong page

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

I now have the story corrected, I picked upo the worng page

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat,

Didn't you just post this chapter the other day? Or did you edit it and then re-post? Regardless, it is good. I enjoyed reading it again.

Thx so much for sharing.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

I think it is a different one. but I will check

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

I did mess up and now I think I have it corrected