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The Story Of Our Love

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Comment from beizanten
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Attention capturing title. It is sweet that they help the handicapped people. a rather sweet romance. a romantic poetries. You have done well. keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review. :-)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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It's great to know you have some good memories about the past. The girl named, Pat, was she a close friend? Kind of was wondering after reading. Glad that you met your soulmate.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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What a wonderful gift to them. I think I missed part one, but will go back and read it. I hate starting in the middle of a story and wondering what happened before. Thanks for sharing this, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the review. I found my original writing of the book today, I thought I had lost it so will be rewriting the whole story.
Comment from robina1978
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Must have been a difficult post for you as your husband wrote it shortly before he died. Nice photo that complements your story. I have to look for the previous ones.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014
    Thanks for the review. Please do check the story from the start then you will have a better understanding of why I did some things the way I did them.
Comment from Caressa_08
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Great picture, so happy on your wedding day...Really like how Wayne is writing this & as we are getting his perspective...Such dedication, that he showed with the disabled, who must of really appreciated & all what he gave all with his time & energy to helping its club members.
Need to back track & read earlier chapters, though this photograph caught my eye...Such a memory & actually brought a memory back of mine when my older sister was married, right out of high school about 1959 & I was about 8 yrs old. ...Though, her marriage didn't last, even though she must of had at least 5 or 6 bridesmaids & bridegrooms...My dad really paid a lot for her big, fancy wedding day And such a festive whoopla with food & a live band, & so many people came & a professional photographer wedding album to pass around...After all, my parents thought they went steady, my sister & her beau, practically all through high school, & this was a marriage that would last....Boy, where they wrong..Seems like your marriage & what I listened to about it Pat, on Unshackled...Was one made up in Heaven..

Thanks for sharing, Pat, I enjoyed the read....Caressa

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you Caressa for the lovely review. Our wedding was a small one my matron of honor the best man my 2 brothers as ushers and of course Wayne and me. I really do believe our marriage was made in Heaven. Wayne and I took one word into our marriage that so many don't that word was commitment. Do go bvack and catch up on all that lead up to this story.
Comment from kiwijenny
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Patcelaw this is a precious legacy your husband left for you and your

daughters

Well penned I love this love story.....

God bless

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thanks you for the review.
    We had heard a radio program about leaving a legacy for our children by telling our stories for the, That is what sparked the idea in my husband.
Comment from gypsycaravan
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Good morning, morning, morning, morning for this lovely story. How wonderful that he wrote those memories for his girls. Enjoyed the read very much.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thanks for the kind review.
    Morning, morning, There is more of this story is coming in the next 2 days, so stay turned.
Comment from Jackarrie
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I really enjoyed your story, how you met your husband and how much you were both in love. I was particularly struck by the writings of your husband, it was a loving thing to do for his daughters.

Very well written.

Mary

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the review. I am glad you enjoyed the read, there is still more to come to the story 2 more parts. One tonight and the other tomorrow night.
Comment from boxergirl
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Great story, Pat. It was engaging from start to finish as we read about how your husband met you. Your aunt certainly added some humor to it with her antics. Thanks for sharing and the picture is great too. 8-)

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thanks for the review. My auntie was a really lovely person and I loved her a lot. She could have been a very angry person because all of her 4 children were born physically handicapped, yet her heart was so good.
Comment from emrpoems
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Love these stories. Sees it was love at first sight. i will try to read those chapters that went befor so I coud catch up on some of the events that went before. God luck with your writing

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thanks for the review. I had some very difficult times before I met my husband which you will see as you catch up on the story. On my part it was love at first sight, it took Wayne a little longer, :-)
reply by emrpoems on 27-Oct-2014
    So it may have seemed to you but I doubt it. Men never show their emotions like us. First or second glance did not matter though you found yourself a good husband