Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

I like this story because every child dreams of seeing the one who picked on them get the payback they deserve. I know we're supposed to forgive and forget, but it's therapeutic to wish to see justice done.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 11-Oct-2019

You're welcome, Patricia.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written story about the school bully whom you outsmarted in front of the class and I bet it was the last of his bullying.

Typo
Robert was none to(too) pleased

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You always get one bully in the class, the one teasing the girls and sometimes causing trouble and your Mother is right to say we have to find it in our heart to forgive them, these kids often grow into troubled adults. I enjoyed your story Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

I'm so glad you got even. Turned the tables on the bully. It serves him right. And you temporarily faced your fear. Don't think I could've been so brave. Your encounter is very well-written, suspenseful, nice job. I hope you got an a.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this memory of being bullied and using your fictionalized character. Despite the wobbly knees you must have felt very proud of yourself to outsmart your nemesis. Sighs- Joan

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Sometimes it takes a tinny bit of courage to change your fat. You definitively outsmarted Robert and your fear of being bullied. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a really great story you have penned and I am so glad you outsmarted that guy. He was not nice at all to you or the girls. You used great words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. I did not see any errors or spag. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Melonie Kirchoff

Excellent

Cute story from your childhood! I think it was a fun read and the descriptive language was wonderful but the conversation could use a little more variety. Maybe instead of "he said, she said," try switching it up to different words here and there "she exclaimed, he muttered to himself, she said as she backed away, he said, sounding ashamed..." and such. Great work, and happy writing!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Nowhereman1

Excellent

This was a well written break from the previous chapter. Nice and short but entertaining. I am really enjoying following this story as you keep adding more

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

Thanks for sharing that story about getting even in a harmless way with the bully. I'll bet he never forgot it either. Happy snake season and keep writing.
Bill

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019

Thanks for the nice review.