Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Mikey, it is my opinion that demonic possession, as it were, is in the reverse of what many think. I think that Satan picks on those who are frail to abuse, confuse and torment them. The brain malfunction is present with or without spiritual influences. It is also biological. Well presented. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2014

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

I like that you are starting small, building up to inquisition on a grand scale. In the sweep of history, we often forget the players, the bit parts, how the whole thing started.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014

Thank you. I love finding old biographies. I have one about Lincoln written in 1870. It is just like you describe, filled with details and first hand accounts that aren't included in today's history. Appreciate all your reviews and input. mikey

Comment from Loren (7)

Excellent

Things are really beginning to solidify with this chapter. Your characters and story line remain strong ... you are writing with authority which gives confidence to your readers (at least to this one, anyway) Loren

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

Comment from Darkhorse555

Exceptional

mikey really most interesting watching were this is going smiling dear friend really interesting piece of reading very beautifully penned pal

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

Comment from faragon

Excellent

This was a nice easy chapter to read. It is starting to look like Valerius is getting quite a little following of his own. I hope it will be enough to combat Leopold.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

Comment from nordicgirl

Excellent

There is no end to the depth you are adding to these characters. I love how you write about modern day issues using 500 AD as a platform. It suits the story perfectly and draws the reader in wonderfully.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2014

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

I really enjoyed this chapter. Julia manages to get the girl out of her depression. This seems to scare the mother. Like maybe she'll die too.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2014

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

You get into Valerius's inner thoughts well as he assesses the situation
excellent dialogue
you work back story in well through the dialogue
brooke

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Good chapter. Looks like Julia's father understands the danger and has accepted a hard truth about Leopold. I suspect Leo LIKED killing that girl .. he got off on it, and now he wants an excuse to play God's executioner again! Kill him off in a very painful way, would you please?

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Hey. That just put the coolest image in my head. Hahaha. I may just kill him off just as you request. I think it excited him too. Thanks for the great idea. More to come shortly. How long would it take to mail egg foo young to California? :) mikey

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 21-Oct-2014

A few days... cold, and probably filled with salmonella toxin by then... eggs, you know. :)

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014

Yeah... but, Egg foo young!! I'm immune to practically everything! My generation didn't fear germs, we embraced them!

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 21-Oct-2014

True. We're better off for it too! My favorite outdoor activity from age 4 to 8 was making mud pies... PLAYING with worm and germ infested dirt. Try that today, and your parents end up in jail! LOL!

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Well now more people are on the same page. There's strength in numbers. I'm curious to learn why Florentina sees wolves and who she was before.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014