Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Wolves At Every Turn"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
17 total reviews
Comment from faragon
I did not notice any lack of continuity in the story line. I believe the way it was broken up needed to be done as there was alot going on between several people. Nice job!
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I did not notice any lack of continuity in the story line. I believe the way it was broken up needed to be done as there was alot going on between several people. Nice job!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Another excellent chapter. It is amazing how you write so effortlessly in this style. You have developed the perfect tone and eceryone sounds completely nstural. Wonderful.
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Another excellent chapter. It is amazing how you write so effortlessly in this style. You have developed the perfect tone and eceryone sounds completely nstural. Wonderful.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
when i read the title mikey i could not help but smile wolves at every turn always a delight reading your pieces dear friend very beautifully penned excellent story so far
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when i read the title mikey i could not help but smile wolves at every turn always a delight reading your pieces dear friend very beautifully penned excellent story so far
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Your debate about medicine and healing really is not that far off base. There are still Muslim "Doctors" who write a passage of the Koran on a piece of paper and have their patients swallow it as a cure. And let's not forget Christian Science, some adherents who have been sued for neglect, the death of children from common ailments -even infected cuts- because their faith does not believe in doctors, just the healing power of prayer. Crazy.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Your debate about medicine and healing really is not that far off base. There are still Muslim "Doctors" who write a passage of the Koran on a piece of paper and have their patients swallow it as a cure. And let's not forget Christian Science, some adherents who have been sued for neglect, the death of children from common ailments -even infected cuts- because their faith does not believe in doctors, just the healing power of prayer. Crazy.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thank you. A lot of the issues in this section are intriguing to me. Thus, it has expanded quite a bit. Oh well, I'm in no hurry as long as no one is complaining! My Great Aunt was a Christian Scientist until she needed a blood transfusion to live... Yep, crazy.
Comment from drivenbackward
This didn't read long to me at all. I'm surprised you thought that. Personally, I don't think you have to worry much about lack of pace in this story. It flows very well. No nits to report. Highly engaging.
The evil one greets even the wise with smiles and praises. -- Good line.
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This didn't read long to me at all. I'm surprised you thought that. Personally, I don't think you have to worry much about lack of pace in this story. It flows very well. No nits to report. Highly engaging.
The evil one greets even the wise with smiles and praises. -- Good line.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
Comment from CR Delport
That is the thing about taking a weekend off. I have more to catch up on. So, meeting Lourdes and her child pulled Julia back to reality. I am curious to see if both can see what the other can.
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That is the thing about taking a weekend off. I have more to catch up on. So, meeting Lourdes and her child pulled Julia back to reality. I am curious to see if both can see what the other can.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Another good chapter. The theme of the child possessed of the demons is seemingly what is needed to snap Julia out of it. The priest continues his evil path, but hopefully with all the allies he will not be able to do anything of harm. Enjoyable read. Faye
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Another good chapter. The theme of the child possessed of the demons is seemingly what is needed to snap Julia out of it. The priest continues his evil path, but hopefully with all the allies he will not be able to do anything of harm. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
Comment from Sasha
Not to worry, the length was just fine. You are doing an awesome job with this and have completely captured my full attention with this story. Terrific work with all of this...I am enjoying it immensely.
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Not to worry, the length was just fine. You are doing an awesome job with this and have completely captured my full attention with this story. Terrific work with all of this...I am enjoying it immensely.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good chapter! I love how they handled the wolves, and the reasons made sense, to all but that damned idiot Leopold. I sure hope he doesn't get his filthy hands on the girls.
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Good chapter! I love how they handled the wolves, and the reasons made sense, to all but that damned idiot Leopold. I sure hope he doesn't get his filthy hands on the girls.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. Florentina and Julia are special people. They remember their life from the pass. It is good they have friends that want to help them. But they are already raising suspicions. There is danger from the church. Great work.
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I love the story. Florentina and Julia are special people. They remember their life from the pass. It is good they have friends that want to help them. But they are already raising suspicions. There is danger from the church. Great work.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
